[Report This]Date: January 13 2016 3:52 PM Title: Nightmares
Brilliant double-twist! I started out thinking: "Oh, no! Not another thinly-disguised nightmare sequence. "
Then, I got to thinking: "Could it be he's skipped ahead a few days, so he can start a flashback sequence, explaining how the test-med has accelerated it's shrinkage effect?"
But, then (thankfully, for Our Hero and myself), you had him wake up. Confirming that I had been right the first time. So, just for being able to briefly fool me, I give you...five gold stars. :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! Honestly, I didn't really have a vision going into that chapter, I just threw out thoughts and took out stuff I didn't need.
Date: January 13 2016 2:11 PM Title: Nightmares
Excellent story with the Barbie. I wonder if that will be his fate? It is a well written and interesting story so far. I am greatly enjoying it. Very realistic. Would be consider going out to get more clothes now that he has something that fits?
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! Very interesting ideas you have there! We shall see!