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Reviewer: meneme2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2016 2:29 PM Title: Purely Coincidental 3'3"

Awsome Story. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2016 8:51 AM Title: Purely Coincidental 3'3"

Wow! Your current prolificity is starting to make me look brain-dead by comparison.

As for this Daphne? I have to wonder if she really knows Helen. Or did she hack into Steve's cellphone?*


*Which, quite frankly, is the one real-life downside, to owning a cellphone, that outweighs all the advantages, as far as I'm permanently concerned.

Author's Response:

Lol, Daphne was a girl from his lunch table.  He started to feel uneasy around her when he started to shrink.  But, you just gave me some awesome ideas for the future of this story.  Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2016 3:40 AM Title: Purely Coincidental 3'3"

My morning just got better seeing a new chapter. I like that he is shrinking slowly. It looks like watch out for Daphne.
Nice,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Diesel!

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