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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29 2016 4:06 AM Title: A Helping Hand 3'3"

I liked the way she bolted the door. Maybe that will be his salvation.
I can fully understand his holding his breath in the bathroom and then trying to breath quietly. Well done.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks man, I was trying to be as immersive as possible with this whole sequence.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 28 2016 10:23 PM Title: A Helping Hand 3'3"

I hope Helen walks in on them and beats the shit out of Daphne.

Author's Response:

We shall see.

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