[Report This]Date: August 15 2016 8:27 PM Title: Warm Blood
Just read this in one sitting. I'll post a more substantial review later but I just wanted to say I rate this HYFR
[Report This]Date: July 24 2016 7:00 PM Title: Warm Blood
Never enough booty action, but I can certainly appreciate how this story focuses more on the relationships between girls. In fact, that drew me in a lot. My one honest critique is that it should have been a little more clear in design. For example, it jumped around a little bit and the ending was rather ominous in a way that I didn't quite fancy, but good work!
[Report This]Date: June 22 2016 10:21 AM Title: Warm Blood
Again I must compliment you on your writing. I continue to find it and the story engaging and evocative. Please continue
Date: June 19 2016 10:27 AM Title: Warm Blood
I've previously read a couple of your stories on this site over the years, and I just went back and read all of them. I really appreciate that you're trying to do something different than the typical story around here.
I'm not a connoisseur of the Unaware aspect of size fantasy, but your stories have given me a good taste for it. Tiny people being physically overwhelmed by giants is a core element of size fantasy, but it is often neglected (including by me) and your stuff does an excellent job of describing the gulf between giants and tinies. The most banal or careless activities for a giant becomes momentous for tinies, a force of nature that is futile to resist.
I also appreciate that your giants truly are a different order of being than your tinies, even if previously they were peers with an established relationship. Any attempt at relations (of any kind) between the two is mocked. The lives of your tinies are filled with awe and loneliness. It's a bleak perspective, and I like it.
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Hi. Thank You for this review. From what people say about me in this community I feel that my writing is very polarizing and some people don't like what I'm doing. Because my narrators come off as emotionless, or my prose is very long winded and poorly formatted, or because I usually deal with weird subject matter like scat or gore or noses. A lot of people don't really try to appreciate who I am for what I do because I'm doing things differently. Whenever someone takes the time to really read all of my work and get an understanding of what I'm trying to do it makes me really happy. It probably sounds stupid when I say that I take way too much time just making sure that the details I include in the story, like scale and where people are and the positions of body parts, are consistent and well thought out. But it's just what I do. I guess I'm sacrificing a lot of aspects that people love, like eroticism and emotion and voice, in favor of a story that I sort of have to sculpt. I'm so finnicky, I'm constantly going through my stories and making edits even months after I've finished them. Knowing that some people like You like what I'm doing gives me a lot of more energy and motivation. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: May 22 2016 11:57 AM Title: Warm Blood
I forgot to rate.
Date: May 22 2016 11:05 AM Title: Warm Blood
I very much enjoy how you assemble your words and thoughts to tell this story. I am in favor of strong development of both characters and environment and your pace is well executed. Just an FYI Chapter 3 about a third of the way down fell is mispelled.
Date: February 22 2016 10:25 AM Title: Warm Blood
Really enjoyed it, look forward to reading more
[Report This]Date: February 21 2016 1:44 AM Title: Warm Blood
Sounds good so far.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2016 12:07 AM Title: Warm Blood
Not a bad start. Definitely would like some interaction with her friend next chapter.