Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29 2016 4:21 AM Title: Pit of Despair

Excellent chapter. Loved the way you did his experience in her armpit. When she got up and he had air then didn't and so forth. Excellent.
Her idea of shrinking herself was brilliant. You also did not do the obvious of having someone walk in while they were tiny. Really well done.
Later,
Diesel