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Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2016 3:21 AM Title: The calm before the storm

Well, that was a long one.

Good job writing Claire's past. She had such a terrible time, one can see where her strength when confronting the girls' problems come from. But, if this was just the calm before the storm, I can't even imagine what is to come.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, since it seems it'll be ful, of revelations.



Author's Response:

Yah, i was worried it was to long. I knew where to go with this chapter but i kept having second doubts on how to play it out. It by far was the most taxing to write, but, i think it turned out good :)

As for whats to come... yeah, i shouldn't even hint at it. I think you'll be surprised my friend.

Hope to post again soon, but, it might be a bit. please be patiant with me >.<

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