Date: May 25 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Just stumbled upon this story and so far it's amazing. I'm so happy to finally find auther who rights giantess fantasy stories purly for the plot (hard to find those in here).
I am going to keep reading this story and I surely going to keep an eye for updates 😀
[Report This]Date: March 07 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
Just read the first two chapters and I really hope you decide to add to this tale.
I don't wanna say I like everything but it's hard for me to find anything I dont like thus far. I cannot wait to see what happens when Annallya learns certain truths about humans and her people or maybe Andrill could be the right kind of instructor for her. You've literally given yourself tons of ways this story could progress and my hope is that you do write more.
aaron
PS
Titans being able to shrink and grow back at will is a nice touch as well because so few action/adventure/fantasy stories here ever use that method.
Author's Response:
My hope was that you guys liked it so that I could continue to write more. Now that I know you think it's good, I'll be getting to work as soon as I can. Thank you so very much aaron for liking my writing and giving such awesome feedback
Date: February 26 2016 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
Aww, what a touching chapter! I'm loving this story so far, I love how naturally you're developing this world, its not exposition dumps, its through dialog and present action that your world comes alive! And both characters in this chapter were amazing, I'm especially loving Andrill, hes a rugged, torn man who is obviously has been through shit. Also I gotta give you props for allowing your GTSs to be vulneareable, not many people here would allow their GTSs to ever be vulnerable to those smaller than them.
Author's Response:
Yeah, says a lot about Annallya's character doesn't it? And thank you for noticing the world developement. I took a lot of time to figure out how to describe things like that without flat out dumping the info in awkward and out of place conversations.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Finally this is the kind of story I've been waiting for. It's like going to the movies or something. I can feel the potential of this great story. With just the first two chapters. How long are you going to make this story? And will there be others to follow it?
Author's Response:
I can't tell you what that means to me to hear. Because this is something I've wanted to do, but haven't felt good enough to do for a long time. And if you like it in only the first two chapters, then that makes me excited for the future when it picks up speed. I don't know how long I'm going to make this story, hopefully it'll be my longest yet. And yes, there will be others. What I love about fantasy so much is that you make your own world for it to take place in. I look forward to expanding on that world.
So thank you again, for reading and enjoying my friend.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Finally this is the kind of story I've been waiting for. It's like going to the movies or something. I can feel the potential of this great story. With just the first two chapters. How long are you going to make this story? And will there be other to follow it?
Author's Response:
Sorry I'm so behind on responding to these comments. I plan to have this story stretch out and go for at least a little while. And if it's not long enough, then I have ideas for sequels. This is probably going to be one of my favorite stories to write on this site. And I'm grateful that people like you are enjoying it. Thank you so very much for the positive feedback
Date: February 25 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Annallya looks like our Titan lead. I just find her reaction to Andrill really odd because if someone beat up my pet,I'd be furious and probably hurt him. Especially since she believes humans to be wild animals, he'd be dead or at least thrown out.
Wyrell is a mystery now and it looks like you are setting up characters in separate scenes first. I respect you trying a serious story like this, its good.
We wouldn't mind the occasional sex scene though :)
One last thing, if Titans are all female, how do they reproduce? Do they kidnap men and rape them to get their seed?
Author's Response:
Well she doesn't know how he got hurt, or at the hands of whom. For all she knows he could havee done it to himself, since he is supposed to be a savage. Or it could have happened in the wild.
The sex scene I've decided to save for a . . . . . rainy day ;)
And I've decided not to answer any questions like that last one, I'll let the future chapters do all of the talking.