Date: July 06 2019 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
You live!
I'm not going to lie, this was one of the last things I expected to see pop up on this site but it was a welcome sight to be sure. I'm glad to see you're still writing and eager to see what you write now. Your stories are really fantastic and you have a good handle on how to write descriptions to give a sense of scale. With the introduction of Mother I feel like the story has taken a new turn and it's rather interesting. Sometimes I feel the sheer scale of Mother loses me but that's more to do with me than your writing. Every detail you write packs a vivd image of the power an authority she wields. Speaking of...
I'm glad to see Maya and Elizabeth pull through. Maya has been a favorite since her battle with Ismat in chapter 1 and Elizabeth the giantess queen is quickly earning her stripes. I'm also interested to see what Anna has planned if the city is to rebel at all and maybe even if they dont ;). So glad to see you back, keep up the good work!