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Reviewer: Ronnie Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2007 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 2: Genocide and Feminine Hygiene

Great addition to the story.  I love the unaware/voyeur aspects and the concept itself feels fresh.  It's a decent length too, not so short that you feel cheated, not so long that it gets boring.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2007 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 2: Genocide and Feminine Hygiene

Great chapter, Galstaff!
Lots of imagination.
Well told from both perspectives.


Author's Response: Thanks, the next chapter is on the way.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2007 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2: Genocide and Feminine Hygiene

Excellent imaginative story.
Feminine hygiene on a giant scale is a wonderful set-up.

Reviewer: ShadowCross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2007 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Genocide and Feminine Hygiene

Phenomenal addition to the first chapter! Good development of the plot line and awesome description. Keep up the good work!

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