[Report This]Date: February 10 2007 1:09 PM Title: 8:00
OK, maybe I did rate the story too soon. It was off to a slow start, and maybe I was a little anxious to read about some interaction between giants and shrinkies. This 3rd part is better. Looking forward to more action in the next part.
Good story line. Lots of potential.
BTW, as suggested by Zalrus, I too would prefer that stories be told in the past tense. Even if it is being told by an eye witness, it is being recorded after the incidents have occurred.
Author's Response:
I think you'll like this next chapter I'm posting now... Actually, given that it's more towards the gentle side, you may or may not. But it certainly has action.
I know the story had a slow start, but as you can see I've got a lot of characters to deal with, and I had to get some basic ones involved so I could start piling on more later.
And as far as the tense thing goes, in this story, it really isn't being recorded afterwards. I do it to preserve the possibility of any narrator's imminent mortality... At least one of the narrators will die before the story ends.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2007 9:07 PM Title: 8:00
Teh plot thickens! I'll admit that I was a bit skeptical of this narrator, as I felt he would be another Holden C-type (And I HATED catcher in the rye, because of that , um, PHONEY!), but good, very good. I've alwys been interested in the idea of diffrent sizes, adds a bit of varity. Well I hope this gets updated soon!
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Zalrus IX
P.S. I hope someone reads my fanfiction on fanfiction.com so people can tell me if it would be wise to put on this web site (Same penname)
Author's Response:
Catcher in the Rye annoyed me as well. I assure you that Carl isn't Holden. They're both misanthropes, but beyond that the similarity ends. This may become clearer over time.
As far as your fanfic goes, if it's GTS oriented, just post it. This place will accept almost anything that's relevant.