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Reviewer: monty Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2007 12:02 PM Title: 8:30

really enjoyed it one of the best wish author would do more chapters including zach meeting with tara again and staying with her

Author's Response: We'll wait and see about that.

Reviewer: monty Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 23 2007 11:40 AM Title: 8:30

i really liked this story different situations i would like to see a couple more chapters ofit

Author's Response: They're coming.  I'm back from break, and getting back to work.  You might see progress by next weekend.

Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2007 3:32 PM Title: 8:30

Very good. I like it.Good Grammer, good story, good charecters, and a cliffhanger at the end (sort of) Who could ask for more? keep up the good work and update soon!

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Zalrus IX 



Author's Response: The update will probably take a while, Zal.  I'm on vacation at the end of this week and won't have access to a computer I can write on.  I promise that I'll try to get it done as soon as I can, tough.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2007 7:12 PM Title: 8:30

this is a very clever and creative story. I am enjoyign the diverse characters and how everyone is a difference size. You have alot of good things going and i look forward to see how you are going to progress this.

Author's Response: Thanks very much, Asukafan. 

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