Date: April 01 2016 12:02 AM Title: Strangers...Close Strangers
That was a fun chapter. However I felt you repeated yourself when you started comparing them to other sorts of aliens. In particular here (since you say they're so much worse twice):
These ones, they're much worse.
Our aliens, the giant women, they're so much worse than the little green men.
Author's Response: Yeah, that is pretty repetitive. Whoops. Though I isles ya learned that if something is repeated it means it's emphasized or important. Probably not the the case here, though. :P
Date: March 31 2016 7:45 PM Title: Strangers...Close Strangers
I like this story, kind of wished we would have scenes of direct interaction with the giantesses but your style does give this more of a survival feel. I do wonder how the giantess queen would survive if her height is in measured in miles.
Author's Response: Well, hey, they're aliens, right? I don't know how she'd survive either, I just wanted her to be really big. Thanks for the compliments.
[Report This]Date: March 31 2016 7:40 PM Title: Strangers...Close Strangers
I'm going to be honest. I was turned off from this story because the description was kinda... light on detail and not very compelling. I thought the story would have been written in a way that I wouldn't have enjoyed. (note: I'm not exactly big on the fetish parts of most stories, because my tastes differ from a lot of people here (not exactly big on feet, lesbians or unaware shrinking, which combined is like 80% of the stories here)). Because of that, I need a story that's exceptionally written to get into the stories that do focus on the parts that I don't care for.
Thankfully, out of curiosity, I just decided to read it, and OH MY GOD, this story is a whole lot better than I expected. I really enjoyed the world you built, and the suspense you've built by leaving out quite a few details about the giants. I look forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it.