Date: April 12 2016 12:19 AM Title: Survival of the Fittest
That was a scary chapter. The decription of the giantess was nice. I guess they don't cut their hair. That put an image in my head: Of this giantess just barely able to see through a thick, long, fringe. Perhaps they have other sense? Breasts could be a second set of eyes for a giantess, perhsp. After all, they are no truly human.
Nipples could be the 'irs' and inside the breast there is the capacity to see parts of the EM specturm that humans cannot see, even if not very well. The layers of rubble may distort the image or they have to conciously make the switch between 'visible lighjt' and, say, infared light. If they survive by destroying cities and eating 'lesser beings' perhaps they should have evovled such a capability because it would help them hunt.
Some real world animals can see more of the light spectrum than humans can. For a giantess, the infared specturm would be an more effective way of viewing the world given all the destruction because they'd detect the hear signature of humans. So it would make sense that they wouldn't care how much hair go in the way of their eyes.
Here:
"Me, too," she replied. She wouldn't really look at me.
Maybe a better wording is:
"Me, too," she replied, not really looking at me.
And here:
If she came win me
You mean: With
Here: Stacy lie on the ground on her stomach
I think you mean: lay
Here: Brown hair covered most of her fave
You mean face
(also this "brown hair covered most of her face", put an image in my head and I'll probably do another render because I like the chapter). I'll also be creating a guide on Deviantart on how to post image linkes to Giantess World. Because people can do better than simply copying and pasting the web link,
Author's Response: The other sense is a pretty cool ode. I don't know much about light, so I'm not sure how well I could write about it if I did. Thanks for spotting out the typos as well. As for the link, I've tried to get it to work since I know a little code but it isn't working. It's the a href tag, right? I looked in the list of allowed tags but I didn't see it. That guide could be helpful as I thought the was the link tag but I guess it's not.
Author's Response: The other sense is a pretty cool ode. I don't know much about light, so I'm not sure how well I could write about it if I did. Thanks for spotting out the typos as well. As for the link, I've tried to get it to work since I know a little code but it isn't working. It's the a href tag, right? I looked in the list of allowed tags but I didn't see it. That guide could be helpful as I thought the was the link tag but I guess it's not.