Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2016 12:12 AM Title: Shadows and Music

That chapter was confusing. I enjoyed it, but it was confusing. My instinct given there will be "giantess content" in the next chapter is he serves/works for a giantess.

Those horror moves with child sound so boring and full of cliché. This laughter is batter I guess? Was the laughter still female? It was hard for me decide how loud it was. Or maybe it's purposefully confusing?

Author's Response: Yes, the chapter was intentionally confusing. None of the three know what is going on, and since it is from Joe's point of view, the reader wouldn't really know, either. As for the clichés, I kind of put them there on purpose. I know they're cliché and even the characters know they are. My idea was that the attackers had watched these movies in the past and used the ideas from the horror movies on their victims. For the laughter, my intention was not female, but it's up to the reader. I was just imagining some sort of maniacal laughter and wasn't too concerned with who it was coming from.