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Reviewer: shane_bolt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2007 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: How I Came To Be

This story was great. This could quite possible be my favorite story on the site. You did a great job. Will there be a sequel anytime soon? It looks like you left the ending to where you could end it there, but at the same time, it leaves the possibility of a sequel.

Author's Response: thanks alot, but a favorite?  I think there are better stories out there.

Reviewer: shane_bolt Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2007 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: How I Came To Be

This story is awesome. It keeps getting better and better every time you add to it. I check back here everyday, just to see if you update. Keep up the good work, you rock.

Author's Response: thank you for the feedback.  I really appreciate it.

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Date: March 15 2007 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: How I Came To Be

Great story. I love the whole thing. You should bring back the woman from the beauty parlor, the woman whose toes he painted. You could bring her back as a punishment for him. But anyways, very good job with this. Please continue.

Author's Response: glad you like it....thanks

Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2007 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: How I Came To Be

I really like this story.

Reviewer: angellady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 26 2007 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: How I Came To Be

Jimmy, this is a great short  story! cant wait to read the one your  working on ! you are very good  at writing, but then  i a have a special interest in your stories !

 

Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2007 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: How I Came To Be

Girls like her are trouble.. I really like how this story is going, but I find myself wondering what kind of control she has on his father to get away with what she does.. It will be interesting to see what happens next, but I really don't like that girl, no matter how seductive and sexy she is, she's still evil and trouble, and I hope the father is able to see through that before someone ends up getting hurt. Thank you for this story!

Reviewer: dajo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2007 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: How I Came To Be

Nice start.



Author's Response: thanks. I thought it was a bit drawn out, but I am glad you liked it.

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