Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2007 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 3: In Cindy’s Care

I'm sorry. Ijust can't stand it. USE QUOTATIONS. We are writing Stories. Stories contain Dialogue Which require Qotations. Just do what you are doing now, but add quotations, otherwise people will not want to read any further. Good story

P.S. please respond to reviews. because if you do, more people will want to. Just look at Nfalc, and SW and others.

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Zalrus IX 

Author's Response: I appreciate your input and will do better with my writing in the future.  Thanks