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Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2007 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 7: Working at the Beauty Parlor

Another thing about grammer. AVOID USING ALL CAPS. IF YOU USE ALL CAPS, PEOPLE WILL THINK YOU ARE UNPROFESSIONAL AND THINGS, AS YOU CAN SEE< IT"S VERY BAD. yeah, so, avoid that. Thank you and good story. I likie where this is going. Roxanne looks like a hero, very.

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Author's Response: noted....thanks

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