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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 12:54 AM Title: Big Tragedy

Very interesting gradual build up with lot of details. That is hard to do. Keeping that transition and development believable. So far, so good.
Keep the characters realistic and don't fall into the pattern of turning her or others in one dimensional characters. The maximum size you choose of 50ft to 100ft is good. Interaction is still possible at 100ft.

Interesting read and I like it so far.

5 stars for you.

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