This is odd. First, it seems that she needs somebody to love, very coincidental I might add, but at the end she's evil. While I have noproblem I feel this very unreal. I know you might say that this whole genre isn't real, but it isn't real literarily, if you know what I mean. Unless she's mentaly unstable, there is no way htat could happen. But I like it, and good grammer, except you're is very very very very very diffrent from your. KNOW TEH DIFFRENCE.

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Zalrus IX