Date: June 07 2016 11:35 AM Title: On the Loose
Julains a pretty cool guy so far definitely better than the one of those cattle.
Author's Response:
Absolutely
Date: May 08 2016 7:49 PM Title: On the Loose
I just read what you have so far. I have to say, you have really mastered the art of pacing. I like it when writers are able to string along the action in longer stories without putting too much up front or making the plot drag.
I also really enjoy the realism of their situation, as well as their varying personalities clashing against one another. Personally, Julian's my favorite so far.
I'll be sure to keep an eye out for updates on this one!
Author's Response:
Thanks for not only reading but taking the time to share a review. I do enjoy a mix of action laden chapters separated by bridging ones to keep the flow going. Although I wanted to feature Josh as my central protagonist, Julian is undoubtedly the most fun to write for. I hope I am competent enough to keep this tale entertaining enough to keep you interested. :)
[Report This]Date: May 07 2016 5:15 PM Title: On the Loose
I'm guessing she eats him.
Of course, if she decides on a more sexy fate, then that would be awesome.
Then again, I have no idea what kind of girl she is. I still don't know her name, haha!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
We shall soon see how this young beauty treats her runaway. I have a couple of names in mind but the fact we are this many chapters into the story and don't know what to call her is done purposefully.