[Report This]Date: June 14 2016 4:24 PM Title: Julian/Faith & Cadence
Epic chapter as usual mate!
I especially liked how this one included sections of both team's actions. Almost felt like a double post rolled into one! :)
And it's exciting to see that the girls are finally getting round to playing... I sure hope that Carver gets a good long run though. While he's evidently not one of the main protagonists of this game, he's a nice guy. It's just too bad he doesn't have as much courage or confidence as the other two, ya know?
Hopefully his cute charm will inspire Candace to keep him around long enough :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review. Yeah it was kind of a double too short to throw out by itself so I put them together. As I mentioned in another review I'm toying with direction which may play into Carvers favor. Not sure yet. As for courage maybe Carver just has more to live for...
Date: June 14 2016 10:44 AM Title: Julian/Faith & Cadence
Damn the snitch Carver won't feel sorry for him when he dies now. Well I will but not as much.
Author's Response:
Lol that put a smile on my face. I am wrestling with a twist that might buy Carver some time. We'll see. Regardless if the others are caught and Henry squeas on him could be prison justice in the box. Snitches get stitches and finks get shrinks. Wait they're already small...
[Report This]Date: June 13 2016 9:41 PM Title: Julian/Faith & Cadence
So now Faith has a sister named Julie. Ok, Julie, Julian, Julie, Julian. Man, that's going to be confusing.
I hope the mom has a nice name, maybe one from my list that I put in a review. I can't wait to meet her!
I like how Faith mentioned that if a tiny got into any of their rooms, there is no way to get them back. That means that both Julie and their mom would be obsessed with a tiny. Julie seems evil, and I'm guessing mom is super horny. Seems about right.
Wow, Carver! You just blew Josh's cover! And I bet Josh heard that! No more saving Carver I guess. He backstabbed Josh, something I thought Julian was going to do.
So there are 4 women and 4 tiny men. Interesting to see a 1 to 1 ratio. Let's play matching! Remember this game, Duggernaut?
Candence gets Carver
Faith gets Julian
Julie gets Josh
Mom gets Henry
This one was tough, especially the last 2. I figured that since Josh is much independent, that he can last against Julie. I think little Henry doesn't stand a chance with Julie. He may stand a chance with Mom and I think he will be afraid of Mom which I want to see.
I just noticed something. Julie spotted the towel. I bet she will open up a lower corner to give the tinies a chance to get into the hall. What a twist that can be!
One thing I almost forgot. You mentioned the height of Faith and Julie. I was hoping that this time, maybe Faith's mom is taller than Faith.
Story is getting interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Faith's mom will make a cameo soon. I have decided on a name from your list. You'll see :)