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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2016 4:32 PM Title: Taking Matter Into Your Own Hands

For some reason, despite the lack of giantess content, I truly enjoyed this chapter.

The discussion between Josh and Julian is important and entertaining to listen to. It even made me think of what they can do next.

Josh and Julian seek freedom and in this chapter, they explained that the mother is not an option anymore becuase in the last chapter, she showed how losing a tiny deserves punishment, so we know that Faith's mom will be very reluctant to let them go.

They considered the sister Julie and I don't think they want to go to her either.

Since these guys don't seem to have a destination, maybe the destination has to find them and that's what it looks like what will happen next chapter.

I think it's Julie that finds them. It could be Faith and Candence since they said that they have to check the dresser, but I just don't see them finding them again. And if they do, what will they do to Josh and Julian? Put them both in the toilet? I doubt it. It would be the 2nd time they find them, so I don't see it happening. Must be a new character.

Just for fantasy, if I'm in their position, I would let myself become a personal pet for the mother and she can keep me as long as she wants. Of course, if I was really shrunk down and fighting for survival, I probably would rather avoid any giantess.

I'm so excited about the next chapter! Looks like giantess content next! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I wanted to show some character interaction away from the run for life stuff. I think the bonding is important especially with what's coming.,,

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2016 11:10 AM Title: Taking Matter Into Your Own Hands

it was liable to get them both caught and likely back into the bowel

Now we're talkin...

Also: "Render unto Caesar" makes a great pick-up line.



Author's Response:

Talk about a Freudian slip, thanks for the snag. I honestly did consider the 'Render unto Caesar" line. I may even go back to add it. Thanks for the read and review!

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