[Report This]Date: July 11 2016 6:32 PM Title: Reacquainted
I feel like this chapter was unfinished, cut short. It felt like it randomly ended.
There wasn't a cliffhanger this time. It was just Henry saying that it wasn't fair and Faith checking the bottle cap. I was expecting Faith to punish Henry for saying it's not fair, but then the chapter ended.
Josh just climbs back in and doesn't say shit. You know he just got ptsd or something. Lol.
Icecream was the reward??!!!!?!!!?!!?! Lmao! I was expecting like some foreplay where Henry gets to decide what to do. They get free food anyway, so the reward was just desert. Pfft. Julian's quest is more of a reward than the icecream. At least he gets some freedom. But icecream?
Lol, Faith needs some better prizes. It's like when you win a contest at school, and you get like a pen with the school logo on it. I mean, prizes should feel special, and I don't think that icecream was special. Carver might have thought it was special, but I bet Henry was like "that's the fucking reward! Why me!"
I bet Julian was like, "Icecream? Did... wait a second. You're telling me...that by not doing anything, you got icecream? That's it? Just some tasty food hat I could've found in the freezer on my adventure? I'm glad I ran away."
I think a little more could've been added this chapter. I think now I realize how much I really miss your cliffhangers.
I can't wait for the next chapter!