Date: July 20 2016 10:03 PM Title: Relocated, Regrouped, and Ready
Oh SON OF A B&%$^!!! Again! I write out a bunch of comments, saved them to copy and the site both told me my comments could not be posted and deleted my copy.
FIX THIS SITE!
Great story as usual.
Not to go over all the different torture scenarios I wrote out, AGAIN; but wouldn't it be interesting if Josh and Julian find tinies Julie is torturing in her room. More erotic-perverse than bone breaking devices. A few tinies locked in gibbets dangling from Julie's toilet seat into the bowl below. Tinies being sewn into the gossets of Julie's panites. Female tinies locked in a circular stockade where the head of one woman is in the crotch (or ass crack) of the next, and so on to complete a full circle.
You know, weird stuff like that. (I can't believe all I wrote out was lost, again darn it, after I copied it too). Bare in mind, if Josh or Julian help or release any of Julie's tinies, then their plans are blown and their cozy accomodations are lost. So it's pretty much leave the others to suffer Julie's tortures.
Is Cadence ever going to get her fun with Carver? Perhaps make him her buttplug, or even her all out suppository.
Author's Response:
Hi DW sorry the site has been messing with your ability to review. I appreciate you taking the time to resubmit. Helping tinies does open a whole new can of worms for our little saboteurs and we will visit this topic again soon. Cadence is by no means done with Carver and don't think she hasn't forgotten Julian s insulting and condescending banter.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2016 5:57 PM Title: Relocated, Regrouped, and Ready
This chapter is just giving me hype for the next few. I love this setup, the planning and using an alarm clock for time.
Part of me wishes that Fiath didn't ask about when they were done, becuase then we can see what Josh and Julian would've done in their free time.
This little trip seems to be the main focus of the story so far. I mean, ever since the proposal chapter, this story has revolved about this charade that Julian came up with.
I just hate this feeling that something will go wrong on this expedition. Like Julie arriving him early. I think that's the biggest problem.
Otherwise, I think this mission is ready to start.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yep it's a prep chapter. Would I throw a monkey wrench into the plans? Me? Guess we shall see Muwahaha...