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Reviewer: Alman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2016 5:18 PM Title: Subterfuge

Nice work in adding to the sisterly-love between the characters. Seriously, the cookie teasing was well put together and really helped color the sister's love/hate bond in a stronger light :D

 

Also looking forward to the next chapter. My fingers are crossed that Carver will at least find someway to enjoy whats coming to him. The first step's always gonna be the hardest right? ^_^;



Author's Response:

Thanks, trying to show a broader depth of character and establish the nature of the relationship. I hope you found the next chapter chapter up to snuff regarding Carver. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2016 10:54 PM Title: Subterfuge

Now, we talking!

The reunion with Mrs. May will soon be ours, my friends. Together, we will guide Julian through the scary hallway and into the room of heaven. Until, we will be patiently waiting for his arrival.

You know. At first, I thought Julie's part was actually some random thing just to delay Julian's next journey. In fact, it was the exact opposite and I have to thank you Duggernaut. Mrs. May might be closer than we think. I just hope it's not some tease like the first time. (I will always remember that.)

Now then, back to Carver fun with Candence. Maybe he will "carve her". Get it? Ok, I give up.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2016 9:14 PM Title: Subterfuge

I kinda agree with Alman, perhaps Carver and Cadence might find that they both enjoy Carver being in Cadence's panty, worshipping and falling deeply in love with her p_ssy.  I did want him up Cadence's asshole, now I'm not sure which idea I like better.  Perhaps once inside, Carver wil fall in love with Cadence's asshole?

 

What ever happens, may Mrs. May find Julian and keep him, perhaps Mrs. May would prefer two tinies living in her panty permanantly, she has the lesbian lady already.

 

Now now, what is Julie going to do with Julian?  A living toe ring?  A full sized spanking on his tiny rear?  Kept in a jar and peed on?  Swallowed then thrown up?

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