[Report This]Date: October 16 2016 5:09 PM Title: The Killing Field
Oh damn!
Well this is a review for both chapters tbh!
First of Carver's turn: that one was great! I feel like you did a good job in capturing the reasonably shy psyche of a tiny unconfident man brought between two colossal beauties. And I like how his treatment isn't necessarily cruel so far for him. So maybe he might come out of this having enjoyed it a little or at the very least for his sake they enjoyed him well enough to wanna keep him around long enough.
Who knows? Maybe his relative 'largeness' provides enjoyable benefits for Faith & Candace's pleasure that could give him a unique edge over the others that he'd have never expected? ^_^; (A fan can dream right?)
And as for this latest one.
Holy hell Faith setting up a trap like that! Totally didn't see it coming! A real tense chapter you've written there now that Josh & Jullian are stuck with Faith on the hunt! o_o
It's not hard to feel the tension from this twist. Hopefully for their sake they can outlast her searching long enough for a intervention to give them a way out ^_^
Author's Response:
It certainly could have been much worse for Carver. I assume you're referencing Julie where you've written Faith. I was hoping the characters were fleshed out enough to be able to instill the tension you've mentioned and because you have I can assume I have :)
[Report This]Date: October 13 2016 1:13 PM Title: The Killing Field
Ok. I'm now assuming that you are saving the best for last. After Julie's multi chapter segment, then it's Mrs. May's turn. (I hope.)
I'm sure Josh and Julian could hide until Faith returns. Only problem is that Faith would have to admit that she was trying to sabotage her sister's room.
Perhaps there are little vents in Julie's room that connect to Fiath's room, or better yet, Mrs. May's room. :)
Like I said in a previous review, Julie is not a giantess that I would reveal myself to. Not the sexy giantess I had once thought. Of course, what she did to Bodhi was super hot, but I doubt she would do the same for Josh and Julian.
Hmm. Otherwise I don't see a way of escape for these 2 men. Unless Mrs. May knocks on Julie's door and "saves" them. It must be foreshadowing that Julian was talking about Mrs. May's control in the house this chapter.
My prediction is that Julie spots Josh and catches him. Julian however doesn't do anything to save Josh, making Josh question the integrity of Julian as a friend. Julian then uses Josh as a distraction to run off to Mrs. May's room.
Probably the first prediction that I hope is not the case. I want both of them to escape, but I'm afraid this is not true. Hopefully, it will still be entertaining, nonetheless.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
We shall see whether Josh and Julian can outlast julie as she attempts to find them. I certainly wouldn’t want to be in her clutches either.