Reviews For Isabel's Journey
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Reviewer: Eddart Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 1:20 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 2: Misunderstood

It's a well writen story. Slow enough to keep the interest and not too cheesy to create a long standing interest. I look forward to reand this story and to follow it.

Reviewer: Zenereth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 4:38 AM Title: Act 1, Scene 2: Misunderstood

This is a really sweet story! I love it!



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm having a lot of fun writing it as well.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 5:03 PM Title: Act 1, Scene 2: Misunderstood

Not sure if telling someone you feel like squishing them is being a "nice girl", just saying. Especially since she doesn't know what kind of circumstances the bartender is in, for all she knows, maybe he really needed that money to feed his family or something... Anyway great story and great chapter! I'll be keeping up with this one.



Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments! About the nice girl thing, good eye. That was a mistake on my part. I think my train of thought is that she was being nice by not crushing him, but you make a good point.

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