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Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great so far, interested to see more!



Author's Response:

Thanks! And there will most certainly be more. Many thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 9

I loved the scene in the lab! It reminded me of the opening credits to SIX MILLION DOLLAR MAN.

"You're breaking me up. You're breaking meeeeee...."

"I can rebuild you. I have the technology."

Author's Response:

Good to hear the scene in the lab was enjoyed, wasn't so sure on on it at first so I went back and changed it too what it is now and I'm glad to hear that it was enjoyed. I once more appreciate the five stars. 

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