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Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 8: Carte Blanche

Very sexy chapter. I love the imagery of Andrew exploring her as if she's a mountain. And I love that Darcy seems to be getting into it. Judging by those last lines, I'm very interested to see where the next chapter goes. Sounds like mouth play is next on the agenda?



Author's Response: Dude, thank you so much- I really love writing these two and I love to have Darcy explore her inner giantess. As far as the last two lines... Hard vore. Hard vore for like eight more chapters. ....... That's a lie... In truth, I do think you will like where this goes. :) thank you for reading, Pixis! It's always great to hear your input!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2016 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 8: Carte Blanche

I'm finally all caught up. Great to see Andrew and Darcy starting to be a couple. I can imagine all kinds of fun with these two. While I personally would've enjoyed more foot action, I can't complain. Can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: I really tried to balance story and fetish content in this one- who knows- maybe some smutty piece may turn up in a later date that focuses on Darcy and Andrew in particular... :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2016 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 8: Carte Blanche

Tell Andrew to be careful when navigating the backwoods, there may be sudden discharges of noxious gas from cracks in the ground .



Author's Response: Isn't that the current theory on the Bermuda Triangle? Some gas that leaks up to the surface of the water and either kills/incapacitates pilots? Anyway, Darcy hasn't had cabbage recently, so I think Andrew is safe for now.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2016 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 8: Carte Blanche

At this point, Andrew should start improvising a love song. Something like..."What's new, Darcy-cat? Whoa-oh, whoa-oh, whoa-oh!"

With deepest apologies to Tom Jones.

Author's Response: Every time I hear that song, I always think of Mr. Nancy from Neil Gaiman's American Gods/Anansi Boys

Reviewer: Saftkeur Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2016 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 8: Carte Blanche

I just love the way this story's been going! By far my favorite element though is their relationshipp; the way Darcy fantasizes about Andrew, and yet never forgets that he's still a person. The awkwardness of them trying to make this work between them, fun and sexy but without glossing over the literally massive difficulties of their interactions. There are those little moments where it's almost a tease for the reader, moments where other stories might push realism/plausibility a little to one side to allow for more indulgence in these fantasies, but then the story itself makes up for all of that.

I'm looking forward to the rest!



Author's Response: Thank you very much, saft! I really tried to focus on their relationship rather than just size dynamic and I also focused on how a couple might reaaaaalllllly act if they were put in a situation like Darcy and Andrew are in now. Thank you very much for your input and insights! Thank you for reading! :)

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