[Report This]Date: August 28 2017 10:12 PM Title: Epilogue: Escape Clauses and Whipped Cream
Hey. So, I literally just made an account for this website after being on it for years JUST to make a review for this story.
I just want to say this is 100% my favorite story on this entire website. It was so sweet and cute seeing these two characters go from best friends to lovers and in the most well-written way possible. Plus, the dialogue between the two made it even more real and sweet to me.
I always love gentle, romantic stories like these on this site as opposed to the rougher ones on here. I'm a sucker for these kinds of stories, but yours sir might be in one of my favorites ever.Thank you for making such a wonderful and sweet story, I hope to see these two precious characters back in a story soon.
Date: August 03 2016 1:18 AM Title: Epilogue: Escape Clauses and Whipped Cream
what an awesome story it was. Full of cutness, kindess, sercastic comments, and vorashios thouts. Exactly my cup of tea. It's really hard to find that kind of stories in these day.
I thinck the vest part was chepters 3-4 whick got to it's climex in Darcy's confession that led to Andrew's confession, it was so emotionall.
i can only hope to see more from you in the future and especially if it's going to be medevil time story just like your first story. Also if you ever run out of ideas you should check the story Olympus. I was so sad to see it cut in the middle and always hoped somone will finish it.
PS you actully made me stop reading my book, The name of the wind, in ornder to finish this story :D
Author's Response: Sir wolf, thank you for reading! I am very happy that you enjoyed this piece, and I am glad you appreciate the little nuances as well :) I really did try and focus on the relationship between the two characters, and so writing that bit in ch 3-4 was fairly challenging- it's wonderful to hear that you think it's good! Anyhow, plans for Darcy and Andrew will continue- in due time. Hopefully sooner than later. Ha, I usurped Name of the Wind? Suck on that, Rothfuss!! :) :) :)
Date: July 17 2016 9:21 PM Title: Epilogue: Escape Clauses and Whipped Cream
Great story. I really enjoyed watching these two grow closer and explore the potential of a multi-size romance. Some absolutely top notch gentle interaction. Telling the epilogue from Sara's perplexed point of view was a nice touch. I hope we get to see more of these characters.
Author's Response:
Pixis, thanks so much for the support on this one- I really appreciate it, and I'm very very very pleased that you dig the gentle interaction. :) Darcy and Andrew will most assuredly return for more adventures. Thanks a bunch, man!
[Report This]Date: July 17 2016 9:12 PM Title: Epilogue: Escape Clauses and Whipped Cream
A fabulous conclusion to a fabulous story, V-7. I especially loved the imagery of the suitably perplexed Sara listening at Darcy (and Andrew)'s door! Of course, while her hindsighted suggestion might have worked for her, personally, I have no doubt her bosses would prove to be absolutely addicted to just the kind of paper work D&A were foresighted enough to supply!*
*And doesn't that always seem to be the case with higher-ups in general?
Author's Response:
There's a second fetish here in this story- bureaucracy. Cary, thanks so much for the continued support! I thought that having the epilogue come from the social worker's perspective might be a nice touch- get us out of Darcy and Andrew's head for a bit. Anyhow, did you know that you won the commission game? Dude, I would love to write you something. Contact me via my profile on here- just click my username and then click the orange [contact] button to shoot me an email and we can talk about it. Thank you for the constant support and encouragement in this piece!