Reviews For Father's Daughter
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Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2007 10:34 PM Title: Midnight Play

gotta love psycho chicks like beth, just makes you wonder what is wrong with women sometimes when they flip out and do the crazy on you.. some might think you should feel bad for her about losing her father and all, but the way I see it, the chick really let herself get messed up and any punishment that comes her way for her derangement shouldn't be blamed on anyone else. Great story though, I love what i've read so far, the ballet flats confuse me but I dig it. Keep it going.

Reviewer: taliban Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2007 7:36 AM Title: Midnight Play

it's a nice start it just nees more action, and i'm thinkin if u want to make it better make the person at the door julia and and insted of being mad, beth talks her in to joining in the 'fun" 

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