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Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2016 9:53 PM Title: Drake the Dungeon Diver

Not a huge anal fan, but the way you write it... Is actually really good to me. Another great chapter! Hope to see some feet action eventually (maybe what I previously suggested? Love unaware forced punishments, especially when Kaylee will discover him eventually lol)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it! I had no idea I was writing it in an enjoyable way xD I think you mean Kaitlyn? She is the only one that doesn't know about Ricky. Well Kaylee doesn't know either but she is with Drake and won't find Ricky any time soon. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2016 11:27 AM Title: The Things We Do For Love

Nice Game of Thrones reference. I love that phrase. It fit beautifully into the chapter too.

Part of me felt like Kaylee knew she could have gotten Drake out more simply, but she wanted to tease him like always and decided to lick him and put him in her vagina.

I think she could've just take him with her hands. (I'm sure she could still be gentle.) Then she can put him in between her toes behind her while still looking at Jennifer so she doesn't suspect anything. Then Kaylee can stretch her foot out behind her and release her brother away from the action on the far side of the bed.

Also, since Kaylee is considered the expert by Jennifer, Kaylee could've taken advantage of this and make Jennifer do all sorts of things to stall her and Jennifer might believe her. Yes, Jennifer was impatient, but I think if Kaylee told her to "be patient she will enjoy it more", then Jennifer will understand and wait.

Also, couldn't Kaylee, just say, "this is making me wet, let me use the bathroom first" while she had Drake in her vagain?

While I think there were many methods of getting Drake out safely, I'm glad you kept this approach becuase it was very entertaining.

Yeah, Drake and Kaylee will defiantely have a talk. Drake might say "was that necessary sis?" Kaylee might blush and then say "yes" with a smile on her face.

Wouldn't it be more fun if Kaylee just told Jennifer that her brother was in her panties and you could play with him? That way, Kaylee didn't have to go thru all that and also she can see Jennifer and her brother bonding. (Sort of.)

Great chapter nonetheless. I can wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Ahh yes. The outcome you proposed could be good for an alternative version of that chapter.

For this chapter though, I wanted to attract readers to the idea of Kaylee trying to hide her brother, while trying not to be sexual at all. Kaylee didn't even want to do it in the first place but her friend provided her with an opportunity to get Drake without her noticing. While your points of the different ways she could have taken him and kept him safe were good, the path she chose was the least obvious as Jennifer just simply thought Kaylee was trying to be sexy. Even after Jennifer violated her friends ass, she still was oblivious to the fact that Kaylee didn't actually want to do it. She was just trying to protect Drake. So that talk that Kaylee and Drake will have isn't going to be the best of talks. Kaylee does Love her brother, but right now she is trying to determine if what she did was worth it.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2016 5:37 AM Title: Wake up bro!

Awesome read so far man. Love the character development. My favorite part was when Kait tried to make Drake be taped to Kaylees panties unaware. Although it didn't work, do you think she could try it again maybe with Kaylees shoes to "punish him" for being a "perv"?

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'll see if I can make something work for ya ;) I have some good things planned out for Kaylee and her brother.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2016 8:08 PM Title: Third Party Intervention

Kaitlyn! Why?! Oh, that scene was so good between Rachel and Christine. I did not want it to end.

I was surprised that Rachel didn't keep Ricky with her. I can picture her keeping Ricky as a pet forever. I'm sure she will come back for him.

Doesn't Ricky know that Christine and Rachel are lovers? So, why would they just toss the strap on in the room? He had to be silinced but now he escaped.

Will Ricky tell Kaitlyn? I don't think so. Kaitlyn might think Ricky is a pervert and will put him in her underwear or something.

Yeah, I agree that male content is not my thing, but I will still read it. Sometimes you just have to put it into the story for the sake of it being a story. All stories take twists and turns and I don't blame your decision.

I can't wait for the next chapter! (Or maybe the one after that.)

Author's Response:

Actually Ricky is still stuck to the strap on. Kaitlyn just doesn't know it and neither does her boyfriend. Ricky does know that Rachel and Christine are lovers by now for sure. The reason they tossed it away was the sudden and unexpected arrival of Kaitlyn. Neither of them had time to really focus on Ricky.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 10:17 PM Title: Hungry Eyes

I'm starting to like Rachel a lot more than Christine now. Her control over Ricky is excellent and I love how she wants him and claimed him.

Ricky wanted to date Jennifer. I think is probably excited on the inside that Rachel looks similar to Jennifer. Then again, he is right to be scared. He went from eating a burger to eating a giantess woman.

Drake meanwhile is also lucky, and I'm not sure who is luckier between Ricky and Drake. Personally, I think Rachel and Christine seem sexier. I just love their attitude and confidence.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 6:10 PM Title: Heat of the Moment

Haha! Thanks for the shoutout. However, you probably didn't even need to do a shoutout this chapter because the only idea I kinda saw was the high heel one. All the rest seemed to be your idea.

I'm expecting maybe some of my other ideas will show up later.

Wow! Drake's mom is the giantess?! I thought there would be a new character but instead we have a familiar face and it would be interesting to see if Drake's mom finds Drake after she found Ricky just now.

Also, interesting to include Jennifer's mom into the mix. Perhaps some threesome action coming up? Or these ladies may punish him and think he is a pervert. The way Christie responded seems like it was out of anger or surprise. I can't tell what her reaction is clearly and I think that makes this a good cliffhanger.

Uploading another tonight? Man, I wish all authors uploaded as fast as you.

Kaitlyn already showed how horny she was. Maybe she got that from her mom. We shall find out soon. I wish I was Ricky. Stuck in between 2 giantess milfs.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: JTH2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 1:35 PM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

I can see the next chapter going in one of 3 ways
1) She will find him and be cruel to him
2) She will find him and be kind and caring( maybe a little bit intimate ;) )
3) She will be unaware of everything, leaving Drake to suffer underneath her.

I honestly don't mind which way this goes as I love this story and I'm sure that you'll do a great job.

Author's Response:

Haha well you just listed the ONLY three options I had to go from. Unless I be a cock blocker and give everyone blue balls by letting him escape again lol. Thank you for complimenting the story and thank you for your review. I am just simply doing the best I can as I have limited writing experience.

Reviewer: Eternal36 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 12:25 PM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

This is great so far, looking forward to more

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 10:52 AM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

I hope kaitlyn finds him again. At the same time just reread where they are they sell "toys" lol. Finally caught up, this is definitely one of my favorite stories.  Just thought about ricky maybe its kaylees mom, kaitlyn might find him and have fun.



Author's Response:

Haha yes. "Toys" However as far as toys I am purly meaning sex toys. There is no hidden meaning. So far, Ricky and Drake are the only two shrinkies.

 

And you'll just have to wait and see here in a little while :P I am so happy you are favouring this story. I am getting much praise and this gives me motivation for sure.

Reviewer: DiscardedToy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 12:23 AM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

I absolutely love this story so far; it might actually even be my favorite (and I've read quite a few). The unaware and accidental stuff is my favorite, but I love the variety you have going so far, and would like to commend you on creating more believable characters than most other people on here, and for not doing everything I would predict (I have gotten so use to the stories here just moving from one event to the next that I didn't even consider him escaping his first panty prison).

I legitimately can't wait for the rest. Thanks for the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the great review :) I purposefully created the anticipation of his first panty prison strictly to create tension for the reader. Like, "ohh gosh that was so close I was sure he would have been in there for sure." The reason I did that was because it was his sister Kaylee. And they both are close to each other. She would never harm him and she'd feel bad if she did. So I wanted to make any sexual reaction with them as "special" and unique as possible. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 9:58 PM Title: Wake up bro!

I'm guessing the woman is a teacher. That's my guess. If it was his teacher, might be fun if she takes him to class while he is with her.

For other ideas, she can stop him in her cleavage. I'm sure a middle aged woman has larger breasts than a typical teen girl.

Another idea that touches a few body parts is when he is in her mouth, she uses her tongue to push him out of her mouth and she slides down her chest into her cleavage and then he slides down her stomach and before he falls to his doom, she opens the waistband of her underwear to catch him.

If she wants to play and be controlling, she can tie up his limbs, tape his mouth and then insert him inside her. That may be too far, but if she is that horny, why not.

If her hair is long enough, she can loop some string to hang down from her hair and tie Ricky to one end. As she walks, Ricky will be bouncing off her ass with each step.

If they take a shower together, he could be the loofa.

There are lots of ideas out there. But first, I want to know who she is and what kind of giantess will she be, gentle, cruel, naughty, mischievous, or what. I think of a lot will be answered next chapter.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 9:37 PM Title: Mind if I Butt In?

Well, this cliffhanger is even better than the last chapter! I bet Drake has his adrenaline kicking in right now.

Either Drake is going to be scared and get out, or he is attracted to Jennifer and decides to stay. Or Drake tries to escape but realizes that it's too late.

You missed a great opportunity when mom showed up. They should have hugged! That way it's a mammary sandwich with Drake stuck in the middle. I think you should do that next time when someone is stuck in a bra.

As far as ideas go, my favorite one is similar to what you did with Kaylee's thong. However this time, this woman ties Ricky to the front of her panties. His back is against the fabric and his wrists and ankles are bound to it. Instead of unaware, she could talk to him dirty about keeping him there all day. (She won't keep him there all day, but it's to scare him.) Also, she could be horny just having this young man please her.

I'm not sure who this woman is, but if she has a husband, she can play with Ricky and hide him when her husband is lurking around.

For unaware, I like the thought of him falling from somewhere and he lands in a high heel and he can't get out since the heel is too high. Also, if she has some clothing on the floor while Ricky is on it, she can pick up the clothes sending Ricky on in mid air and possibly landing on her.

Then there is the necklace. Not exactly sexy, but it's a cool idea. A simple string to both arms and we wraps the strong around her neck. Also, there are versions like a belt, and he is hanging from it so he is dangling in front of her private area.

If this woman has a little kid, this little kid can put Ricky in spots where he gets close calls (or intimate encounters) with the woman. An example would be the woman prepares a bath and the kid just throws Ricky in the tub and he is stuck awaiting the woman.

I think with this woman, I would like it if she saw him and played with him. If you decide on unaware, that's cool too, but I think this woman will get what she wants if she sees him.

Another idea is the superblowjob. She puts his member between her lips and sucks. She could then put him inside her mouth afterwards. Maybe, as a mature giantess, she can get kinky and use bondage on Ricky. Tape, rubber bands, string, floss, hair bands. Lots of items to tie him up.

(This following idea is from another story.Not mine.)Another idea is this woman has another tiny man that got infected by the rock and she keeps him prisoner and all wrapped up so he looks like a mummy. Then Ricky unwraps him and frees him. However, the guy that he freed decides to wrap up Ricky so the woman won't be looking for him since she still has a mummified person to play with but she doesn't recognize that it's a different person.

She can use Ricky as a mouth wash. Take some listerene in her mouth. Drop Ricky in her mouth, and swish him all around giving him a bath in the process. Her teeth and Ricky are clean.

For desert, she can dip in something sweet and then suck on his body like a popsicle.

Well, that's all I can think of right now. I have a feeling that you probably knew most of these ideas judging by how clever your ideas already are.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Whoa! That's a ton of brainstorming you have already done there. I think I may have something for you in future chapters. It could mix a combination of your ideas as well so it works out. Some of them I may not do, not because they aren't good ideas, but mainly because they may not ever have a situation that calls for it. Example would be the necklace idea. However, being any type of accessory may work out. We'll see. You're not going to be disappointed next chapter I promise ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 6:07 PM Title: Dungeon Master, now the Dungeon Dweller

I just read all 7 chapters right now, and I'm impressed. You have a great balance of story and sexy and I'm very interested to the point that I will continue following this story.

Kaylee and Kaitlyn have very similar names and I get them mixed up a few times. (Was that intentional? lol.)

I think you have read my mind on a few of these chapters becuase being tied to a pair of panties or a thing is on of my favorite things to read on this site. I read a girl tying a man to her mom's panties, a girlfriend tying a man to his ex's panties and this is the first time I see it happen between sister.

Also, I kinda wished that Kayleee didn't notice him becuase then that would've been a fun chapter.

Kaitlyn doesn't even seem to be a sister. She feels more like Kaylee's friend and the shock of seeing Drake in that drawer made her feel mad.

Another thing I enjoy is being unawarely carried in a purse. I know it's not exactly sexy, but the thrill that anything can happen always is a great cliffhanger.

Did I mentioned that I'm a fan of middle aged women? Nothing is sexier than a horny milf and I think Ricky will end up in an interesting situation that I hope turns sexual. (Fingers crossed.)

I got so many crazy ideas for Ricky's situation, but I fear that he won't be staying with her long so I'm probably shouldn't bother mentioning them. However, if this woman becomes a main character giantess, then I have lots of suggestions that I would love to see happen to Ricky.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your detailed review and opinion. I appreciate all of the input you have put into that. In fact, I want to throw you a bone. You tell me a few of those ideas you have, and I will certainly try and add them to this story. I will even give you a shoutout at the beginning chapter notes. And don't worry. I think when you find out who this middle aged woman is, it will be both a surprise and a delight because it will allow more interaction. Oh and to what you said about Kaylee being unaware. You're right. It would have been a fun chapter. But after JUST getting done with so much sexual things with Kaitlyn in the previous chapter, I wanted to purposfully add sexual tension for my readers. I basically cock blocked you all lol. But I JUST added a new chapter that I think you will find the release you need. The tension I built up about what could have been with Kaylee, I ended up relasing a little bit in this chapter.

And on one last note. I did NOT intentionally make their names similar to throw off my readers. Coming up with names for a story can be challenging. So I made two generic names that would be suitable for sister characters. For now, just associate Kaitlyn with age. Since she is the oldest teen character I have introduced into the story. Kaylee you can associate with her age too because she is only 15. I use the two E's at the end of her name to distinguish to make sure I don't get mixed up either.

Kaitlyn did seem like more of a friend. But agian, she is 18 and Kaylee is only 15. She is aware of how vunerable her little sister is so she is going to look out for her. She clearly didn't like Drake even before the incident so she is making it more prominant with her actions. I hope this helps explain some of my character development to you. And please do send in your ideas. I will gladly try and add them to this story for you.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2016 10:13 PM Title: Kaitlyn, the Witch

Amazing, I love it! Tied to dildo and sewn to thong so far, both my two favorite things.  Love how kaitlyn thinks he's a perv and is doing all of this to him.



Author's Response:

Glad you think so :) don't worry, she isn't done yet. Whether she knows it or not ;)

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2016 6:38 PM Title: Close calls with little Sis

Love how you're updating rapidly. Other than the occasional grammar mistake, the story seems good so far.



Author's Response:

Yeah! I myself spot them afterwards and get annoyed. Unless I use Microsoft Word, this site doesn't have a spell check so if I make a typo, or get lazy with my typing and forget to spell out a full word it doesn't pick it up. I'll try and keep it at bay best I can though. And thank you! I am trying to keep it going fairly quickly and also do the best I can since this is my first story. It is my first impression for this site so I want to make it count. I am glad you are enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: santiago1985 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2016 8:34 PM Title: Wake up bro!

About chapter 4. I liked this version more than the previous one. Remember that you still have to change the old end chapter notes.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so as well. And ah yes thank you for letting me know! 

Reviewer: 2meta2fast Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 11 2016 2:38 PM Title: Kaylee, the Dragon?

Ah. Good ol' incest (if this can count as it). Certainly an interesting way to get straight into the erotic part(s) of the story!



Author's Response:

I actually debated if I should edit that chapter and rewrite it to save the most sexual part for later. I may still do that actually. With that chapter just simply involving a little footplay. I am wanting him to have more interaction with Kaylee than with Kaitlyn. Kaylee and him obviously get along really well and I'm sure readers would be wondering what her reaction would be should she find out that she inadvertenly had her brother up her ass.

Reviewer: santiago1985 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2016 10:35 PM Title: Wake up bro!

i've read it and i like this story very much indeed.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am continuing brainstorming to find as perfect of a story as I can for you guys! 

Reviewer: santiago1985 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 11:28 PM Title: Wake up bro!

Interesting plot and very attractive name!
By the way. I didn't start to read the story yet



Author's Response:

That's ok! I am glad you enjoy the plot and name so far! 

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