Date: April 18 2017 9:26 PM Title: Waking
A lovely little chapter. I'll forgive you this one time for not sating the needs of the fetish-hungering masses.
A welcome chapter, and I'm glad you decided to add it in after all; it's these small, but meaningful interactions that deepen the story and make it feel that much more real.
Author's Response:
lol, well thank you for your forgiveness on the lack of fetish content :) It was gonna go that way in early versions in my head (walking along toes and legs amd the like), but i decided i wanted to focus more on the relationship between the two. Im so happy that you dug this, Saft! thank you so much for reading!
Date: April 18 2017 8:44 PM Title: Waking
Very sweet story. I always enjoy these characters and their relationship. While this may not have been an overly fetish inspired chapter, it's the little interactions that get me, like her breath ruffling his hair or him needing both hands to grip her nose. I love details like that.
Author's Response:
I really enjoyed agonizing over this piece. Small interactions and subtle little details. How Andrew got down from the night stand and what path he took to get to Darcy went through maybe about 5 revisions. My favorite part about this piece was actually when he gripped her nose- that was the small counterpart of him placing his hands on her shoulders to really get to her or comfort her. I meant to be, if I can be forgiven for thinking so, a manly, reassuring action. I really love it because even at this size, his words and gestures have meaning. Though he's still half-asleep and probably fell asleep next to immediately when they started watching netflix/hulu/whatever, he still wanted to be there for her, emotionally, and physically, however he can. Thanks for reading!