One of my fantasies was the step mom scene with your stepsister's delight story. Unfortunately you seemed to have stopped that story.

So, when I saw this story, I saw the focus was on the step daughter, and I was hesitant about reading this story. Well, I finally did and what a blast it was reading all these chapters at once.

I feel bad for all your other reviewers who have had to suffer through your amazing cliffhangers and teasing to wait for the giantess content. Lucky for me, the fun is just getting started and I didn't have to wait as much.

Besides only 1 review of your 60+ review, no one has demanding the giantess content, and I think I know why. You do a great job at teasing. You flirt with ideas of shrinking and seduction and while the action is little, the little whispers and movements of Addie can ignite a fire in all of us that makes us satisfied with the chapter.

Not only that, but we can also follow your method of suspense and how things are getting closer to Jim actually shrinking. First, it was just talk of shrinking, then an object got shrunk. Jim felt safe since these were just objects and not living things. But, then the dog shrunk, and we knew, Jim included, that things were about to get real. She shrunk a living thing, and we knew it was inevitable that Jim was coming up. Soon, his shoes shrunk, so he couldn't leave the house. This showed Addie's control. Then finally, barging into her room set Addie off. You could tell she was withholding her power, but he room being invaded was a big no no and bam. He was shrunk.

One thing I found interesting was Karen's view of this idea. She rejects it constantly, but something tells me that she also ponders this idea sometimes and I think Addie can sense it too. Karen probably is into this idea, but isn't ready to show it yet.

Another thing about Karen is how she keeps arguing with Addie. I think it would be interesting if they were actually cooperating and together teasing Jim. So instead of seeking Karen for help, Addie will make Karen join her in her fun with Jim and together they can fullfil his fantasy.

What a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind review.  It was fun to read the summary you wrote of the story and how things methodically evolved, which I had put some thought into when writing--trying to balance the suspense.