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Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2016 12:07 PM Title: Undefeatable

I certainly enjoyed this story. My favorite part is where she tells Brittany that just one of her own was bigger than both of the other girl's. The only part I'm confused about is how exactly was Brittany knocked down the first two times.

Anyway once commissions are open again(and I can think of a proper sequel) then I might commission a second chapter.

Author's Response: Sounds good to me! I'll Let you know when I am able.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2016 12:07 PM Title: Undefeatable

I certainly enjoyed this story. My favorite part is where she tells Brittany that just one of her own was bigger than both of the other girl's. The only part I'm confused about is how exactly was Brittany knocked down the first two times.

Anyway once commissions are open again(and I can think of a proper sequel) then I might commission a second chapter.

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