Reviewer: klon Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

Super!!!

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

I really liked this story.  Kind of wished she would of saw what the stuffed animal was, but instead she finds the drawer full of toys so that was great.  I wish there was a bit more tf with the other fun stuff in there lol.  Usually prefer object tf vs  body.  I wish you would of continued and not give it the happy end.

Reviewer: six006 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great story, wish I could be Brandon actually he. I would welcome more stories like this in the future. Found the idea of mm actually hot and intriguing when done like this plot, written like a Halloween horror story.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

I didn't want to give you a bad rating, because of how much I loved the two first chapters, but honestly, chapter 3 was a huge disappointment for me. Why did you switch over to f/m where it was a m/m story? You somehow destroyed the amazing plot for me with this chapter. Also because of how this seemed like a "happy end", and how Brandon even enjoyed himself, which doesn't make much sense in my opinion.

But thats just a personal preference, and I want to be objective in my review. The length is amazing, like the chapter before, and you are a master of ironic twists. I loved the first half or thrift of the chapter. The best part was with Brandons best buddy "turn" for him and befriend this "wimp faggot". I liked how you put the "it can't get worse" a few times. Unfortunatly the ending was a happy endings, so it didn't fit actually.

I loved how you created the Jamie character though. How he was this friendly gay boy, how he had this room looking with cute girly stuff, how he wear those cat ears and earrings and everything, and how he wear skinny skin tight jeans. How he was friendly to everyone, even to Brandons friend, and everything, I just loved that.
The whole plot idea is still a 10 out of 10 in my opinion, even I didn't like the ending, and was hoping for something else, it would be unfair to down vote it because of that.

I was actually hoping for a m/m ending, would be hilerious actually if we find out Charlie was gay too and they would fuck, and then Brandon tf's again ending as Charlies inner ass (his mouth his anus).

Honestly, I am really upset now, that this story is marked as complete. Because I am just so in love with the character Jamie.

I saw what you put in the last line, and I just have to beg you, please moe m/m tf stories like this one, please in a high school (age 16-18), with some twink boy again as the unaware guy. I would just love to see a more unfortunate plot though of some guy actually ending as some twinks ass, and him literally have the "honor" of experience what it would be like to vomit up a bowl movement aka taking a dump. And then the guy just casually wiping, mostly sitting in school or before going to school, and then the poor guy just a shell of his former self, with a "shocked" expression on his "face", like he was literally raped, no, worse, and him vomitting in his mind of what just happened, or even not being able to think anymore, just "looking into an abyss", and *FLUSH* *ZIP*, the boy rushing out, thaaanks moom, bye, and the guy in his ass just screaming in his mind.

Another thing, just a personal favor though, please no giant plots. This story is so good, even I didn't like the ending, I think it's best of 2016 if I could vote, and it truly found a part in my all time favorite list of stories. I also think it's your best story so far you wrote.

So, yes, I wishing to see more high school m/m tf stories like this one. Especially the idea of some himophobic alpha males being just humiliated ending "in hellish" situations is just awesome, and totally now my favorite.

Even if marked as complete, maybe there is still a chance of a sequel and it's not the end yet of Brandon.

Please write more stories like this one!!! :-) Your just have to.