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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2017 2:39 AM Title: A Late Night Date

Very cool and fun. Loved Maxine's teasing him in the car. The shirt pocket ride was glorious and well described. This is fun.
Will Suzie return?

Author's Response:

Oh yeah, Suzie is going crazy looking for her missing husband, ...she might have a bit of a shock though when she finally does find him...

 

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2017 9:25 AM Title: A Late Night Date

The way Thomas saw Amy's beauty made me shake my head laughing. "Wolves in Sheep's Clothing." Is pretty much the best way to describe her but now that I think about it, a lot of the other ladies fit that quote too. Your description on Amy's hairstyle was top-notch, really had me more enarmored with the gorgous blonde. I also found Amy's eagerness to get her hands on Tom when she answered the door to let Maxine in quite frightening. It was a nice touch to show just how much she wanted to use the little man to sate her sexual needs. I gotta say midnightwriter85, with the way your story is going, you'll probably earn the "New World Order" tag.



Author's Response:

Haha, yeah. ...But, hey - aren't they all? (wolves in sheep's clothing) ;`)  Hm, maybe,  I shoulda added that 'NWO Tag'... 

Thank's Nothingness.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 10:49 AM Title: A Late Night Date

I was panicking for a second becuase none of my favorite authors were posting for the last 5 days. Glad you broke that streak. I was getting anxious.

Wow! Holy Amy!

This woman cannot dissapoint me. Even the parts where she is just talking to Tom sends me chills. When she gets physical, my eyes just start getting bigger, and this is only the beginning. This is a great warmup chapter.

When you mentioned "Amy's parking space", I thought you meant that Maxine was in the parking lot where they work and she found Amy's car. Then Maxine started talking about Tom falling sleep on the seat and someone might sit on him. I was connecting some dots and I was thinking that Maxine was going to put Tom on Amy's driver seat so Amy would sit on him.

Maxine brings up a great point about Amy being on of those ladies that love that dominant fetish. Sometimes I wonder that if society didn't care much about male dominance, maybe more women could express their dominant side in a relationship. Part of me thinks that a dominant female isn't that rare and it's just media trying to use powerful guys as a cover.

You mention the Stockholm syndrome and what's interesting is that I actually think I might have that if I get captured by a beautiful lady. Most giantess stories that I write/read are about a giantess capturing a shrunken guy. That capture feeling just embodies that dominant side that I like seeing in a woman. (But I don't want this Tom to enjoy it. Hehe.)

Yeah, Amy is definately kinky. First thing she does is tape me down to the table and decides to sit on me. That so freakin hot! I can't wait for Amy to use all of her little bondage devices to tie Tom up and use him.

I totally agree with Amy, a fetish within a fetish. I would watch videos under giantess and then narrow it down to panties. So many giantess videos consist of vore, feet and boob crush. The panties are my fetish for giantess and I love the scenes where they simply drop the tiny down her pants and she relishes the feeling of him squirming down there. Man, I need to meet a real life Amy. ;)

Amazing! That one paragraph where Amy, (or maybe Maxine) was describing the feeling of a tiny in their panties. I would to see more sexy thoughts like that from Amy like what she plans to do with him.

I like how you mentioned Amy as a young mother when she opened the door. I always have believed that young moms are both hot and have the ideal sexy body that I like. They have those wide hips to compliment their narrow waist and with such a wide set of hips, you can only imagine the cavernous pussy that lies in between. I bet Amy's is ready for its next meal.

I also remember in your Bob's ultimate experience stories, I loved the chapters with his mother in law. Although she was a bit more gentle that I expected, I enjoyed how she kept him in her panties too.

Interesting that Amy was wearing soemthing so casual. Makes me think that she didn't want Maxine to know how much of ravenous vixen she really is. We know Maxine is aware of Amy's dominant nature, but I think Amy has some tricks that Maxine still has not learned yet. Sweatpants and a loose shirt. Yep, Amy is just downplaying her excitement. Once Maxine is gone, I imagine the sexy outfits to appear: pantyhose, extra small panties, lingerie, leggings, and yoga pants. Probably even more than that. You could never know with Amy.

I so love the teasing that Amy did when Tom was in Maxine's pocket. Her baby voice with a hint of flirting was super sexy!

When Maxine entered the room, Amy locked the door. That sounds hot. Amy locking doors so no escape. I hope Amy locks her bedroom door also.

That was a long time for Amy to squat over Tom. I bet she was giving him a sneak peak of his home for the future. I also like how Maxine was saying crush him. Almost feels like a threesome.

What an opening play by Amy. Her first impression was outstanding!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

  Yeah, it was kinda tough getting this one out. I had to work a lot of last week, and I only had about an hour each evening to write. The chapter had to be re-written 'three times' before I thought that it was going in the right direction for Mr. Thomas. It seems that you've picked up on nearly all of my little 'Tid-bits' (although, I have a very long list of 'Treats') the timing and situation has to fit perfectly, though, before using most of them. -you can't just throw a certain type person into any situation, it has to fit their particular perspective.  Yeah, I think that too, A lot more women are willing to be the sexual aggressor - if given the chance; the quiet type 'librarian' or the cute little girl that works the cash registrar at walmart - it really has a lot to do with their past relationships, if they ever get to explore that certain pleasure of being the one 'On Top'.

  Creating Amy as a dominant natural beauty, would seem odd though, (to most readers) thinking that a beautiful woman would never need to be dominant in order to get into a relationship with anyone, ...although, in those rare cases, she actually wants (Needs) to be the Fem-Dom... she craves being in complete control.

  I'm trying to focus on the slow, sublety - an excrusiatingly slow build up has a much more powerful effect, creating a moment within the box, a blurry wave of slow motion that allows you to temporarily escape into the story. Hopefully, I can get it right! ;`)  Thanks for the input Tom!

 

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