Reviews For The Wrath of Sammy
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Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

This TF is so hot, so realistic, so good, the vore part was one of the best I read, too many authors leave those good parts out of the shrunken guy screaming in pain, skin melting, having his skin melting away, and I loved your realism of where he banged against the acidic stomach walls then realizing that was a bad idea. And the casual burp of Sammy withouth a clue of what was going inside of him.

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 3

I just noticed yesterday night you had writte a new chapter on this, and couldnt get enough reading. length and everything was so good. The ide with Sammy thinking it all was just a dream is the best, hope it stays like this. There arent enough good m/m stories on here, so I hope it will continue like this, please don't ruin this amazing with going apart this road. How you made Sammy speak and act is the key to the success on this story, totally stay with it and it's just gold. I just love the unfair and ironic parts the most, for example here "There was a loud growling, like a feral beast, off to Chad's left that caught his attention. It was Sammy's stomach." that was a good laugh, he was nearly over the top and maybe able to roll out of the pac.. *GRRRRLRLLL* LOL! I could see his suggar "skin" literally melting of his body of this nightmarish sound, like it was mocking and laughing at him, and it made it so much better, because it was Sammys stomach sound. I liked how one thing led to another, Sammy forgot to eat, if he hadnt he may have not eaten Chad. and the unfairness of it was actually Sammys fault of what he said about Chads mother, and now Chad had the honor of going through Sammys digestive tract. So glad I found to this story. It's one of my favorites now. I Like.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2017 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

I think a nice visualization for Sammy is also the character Nai from Karneval:


http://ami.animecharactersdatabase.com/uploads/chars/11498-1667347137.jpg


I also had to think of the boys from idolish7 because of that pink pyjama:


http://i.imgur.com/KPOrfmf.png


and that bunny suit would fit so perfectly to Sammy too :) I love the idea of Sammys nightwear pyjamas were a bit moisture in his crotch and butt area because of sleeping in them, would giving them a good fit.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

loved it espescially the vore and food tf

Reviewer: camehere2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

I came, several times xx what a juicy plot, pleas continue

Reviewer: redcars Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

this my fav chap so far, well done, no, can't think how it could have been better. longer chapters and good telling are a bit rare on this site, but you are great in them. can't wait for the next parts. nice cliffhanger idea with the party, I could see actually some or lots of the older team members be like whats this loser doing here, and maybe even Lucas doesn't want to look like a loser too to his new friends, and dumps sammy. or just be like sry dude, the guys said you should leave but well see monday in class, no hard feelings right. then maybe some of them nearly beat him on the party and got tfed, then maybe even Lucas ate one of them without knowing. a cool idea could also be one of them being tured into a flesh light, or sex doll the guys use during the party as the amusement tool, like a typical jock school party.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

I forgot this !! This is how I imagine Sammy look like :

http://i.imgur.com/FkaWOtg.png

A character from Persona. Skinny, twink ("wimp/nerd"), no gram fat on him, flat 6pack tummy, all curved, a full moon butt though, all muscles. I also love those school uniform throusers, they are made from that soft thin fabric, forming around the butt so prfectly, giving them a wedgie, and if it's a humid day it literally glues on them. I could perfectly imagine him in those pink skinny boxers and the shirt, and him masturbating sitting in front of his PC, or just on the toilet.

Reviewer: six006 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2017 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

the digestion part was damn guuud, I liked how you put more details into it thatn most authors do, I like graphic details a lot, could have been even more graphic for my taste, I like when the skin melts away and the micro suffers seeing his bones holding up the hand, screaming in agony, and then mixed with the boy just burping. would like to see more graphic stuff like this in the next parts, hoping for another digestion part, maybe some other tiny food like a peanute or a beetle. I liked the idea of the guy being human again in the stomach, making him suffer ttwice and how he even through he could awoit digestion was the best.

Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

Talking about shout outs... I guess it hit an ear, or was just pure luck. This is the best of them so far, had a lot of fun reading it. I literally "swallowed it" and it was over too soon, then read it again. This is a sweet dessert like the candy in it.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yes, yes yes!!! What a damn epic surprise, I was hoping so much to see a new chapter on this story, and you totally outshined yourself with this. It was the best chapter so far, and please let me say, this is now the best transformatin story on here, ever written. It sky rocked into my heart and is truly now one of my all time favorite stories, I am just in pure love with it.

I hope this story wont end soon and will have lots of more chapters in the future. There is yet so much great stuff which could happen, turning people into objects, and letting them literally go through hell, with no one to know, and no one to find out, ever, even not Sammy.

Please let me say, I hope Sammy will stay unaware through the whole plot, it is sooo much better this way, and adds to much more humiliation for the unfortunate charactrs. It's so much more cruel and unfair, to casually be used, abused, eaten, tortured, by those boys and espscially Sammy having no clue about it.

The idea with the pink pajamas pants and the girly shirt with princess on them... EPIC! I love your ideas you come up so much, you rock man.

Also the whole writing style is just perfect, please don't change it through the story, just THIS, this this this. It's so ironic this new chapter came out today, because I am watching since hours Persona 5, which came out yesterday, and I just love high school plots more than anything.

The first lines of the chapter were already fantastic, with the wet dream Sammy wet, mostly adding some white stains into his cotton boxers.

"He felt his underwear feel a little damp and checked to find out that he had a wet dream last night." this simple line was so hot, and I could give example after example of this hot damn great writing style. I also love the difference of each character, especially Sammy is such a character to fall in love with, with him just being a skinny twink, wearing those skinny clothes.

If I could wish for something in the upcoming chapters, I guess after the next one because it would be around that party mostly ou mentioned. One of the teachers being turned into an "living" anus, of those examples I wrote before in my comments, maybe because of some surprise exam, and I could even see Lucas say those vulgar things like what a shit-head, or how could this asshole get any shittier. I imagine him actually like the character Ryuji Sakamoto from Persona 5 ( http://i.imgur.com/KfJ5XrZ.png ), because he's so open and just uses lots of words like crap, shit, dick, asshole in mostly ever few sentences of him. I could see them having this conversation about the sucking test, and then the poor teacher becoming turned into Sammys anus, then even worse of Sammy having to use the bathroom later in school or after coming home, then doing his homework sitting in his skinny damp boxers, with a rape ass sitting on his PC chair of not wiping properly.

I also would love a boxer tf of someone, especially of that line above, "He felt his underwear feel a little damp and checked to find out that he had a wet dream last night.".

Then that fly tf idea would be awesome too, Sammy smashing some pesky flies in his room or even feeding one of them if its two or three, to his pet goldfish in his room.

Please let me say a few words about the m&m tf, EPIC!! That was one of the most hot tf plots I ever read. I have to say I was a bit worried at first, of it would be over too soon, because you let Sammy crush the m&m, the idea of that one smacking him out of its place "saving him", and how you made peanute goo splash into his "face" was fantastic. But then you made a surprise backfire, of Char being human form and the size of a m & M in Sammys stomach and going through digestion, FANTASTIC!!! I think an even more cruel idea could have been him being sucked / drained, into Sammys small intestine, and meeting the fishy foul digestion in there, melting alive, and part of him becoming gas to pass for Sammy a bit later as an fart.

Hope this will be posted because of the length, but please, I would give you 100 out of 100 points for this. Thank you for updating this story and catapultating it into the best tf stories ever written already in my opinion. And I just hope to lots of more chapters to come in the future. Much love and thank you for making my day <3

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