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Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 5

Did not like this chapter very much because of the testicle vore, which I said before is just not a thing for me and I want it to work out, which can't because testicles arent hollow... they are a solid object, and most of the fluids of cum also doesn't get produced in them... they arent hollow, so something like this could never happen. But I said it before in a comment.

Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2017 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

Truly beyond and so damn enjoayble. Would like it seeing continue the way so don't make Sammy aware. Unaware is way more trhill and adds a lot to this story. I always liked your other unaware stories. I wouldn't much like the story going aware. The hard-on part was made me hard. I am a huge fan of embarrassing and cringe moments, don't know why but it turns me on. It connects me with the character and you just did it right.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

Just found THE PERFECT look of Sammy and wanted to share it too:

http://i.imgur.com/KzK7UWl.png (maybe a bit shorter hair)


http://i.imgur.com/0ii6hQ7.png (I imagine him wearing boxers like though maybe some more girly ones with hearts on them or tiddle teady bears)

Reviewer: redcars Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

wow :o thank you for making my day this was so much fun to read again but its over so fast again lol, have to read it again... maybe do some smaller shrinking plots and then together with a tf. what if someone turned smalle than an ant and then turned into little skin dirt under Sammys forskin, must be hell of the mix of swet, urin, and cum, or into a dingle berry around his asshole or so small the size of a dirt particle then becoming a tiny little part of sammys underpants in his ass area or front part. I liked the m&m part so far the most maybe another like that, someone turn into a gummy bear in a package around lots of others? maybe some animal tf? hope the story never dies so many good things can happen and the characters are just so good, I love sammy you created such a good person he's the best and I just love the bad guys suffer through the plot, especially if they are some assholes.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 5

The Coach cought fighting for his life just inches away from Sammys penis, getting hard, anc hi getting a boner sitting in class was so damn hot. Please more of this horny puberty things. Also in this style was so great the party, maybe another party would be cool, then things like maybe getting a morning wood, or a boner standing in school bus (was no place to sit and the bus totally full) behind a hot girl, who bounced her ass against Sammys crotch. Then what if someone got turned into smega and Sammy not showering for two or three days like the typical unhygenic teenager, maybe in a rush of getting late to school, after he woke up with a morning wood that would be good. Someone turned into thick phlegma, Sammy got stuck from in his sinus and he swalloed the phlegma ball down and it slowly sliding down his throat sitting in school. Please more gross stuff like this it's so hot combined with the school plot and around puberty. The part with Sammy taking a shit and before a piss was the best of the whole story so far, more!! The ironc of giving the Coah false hope, two times, was the best, of him actually thinking HE was the reason stimulating Sammy and giving him a boner and maybe "dry erection" lol, where in fact, it was all false hope, and his tiny insignifant being was never more than a littl tickle, no it was the teacher who gave Sammy the boner, and then also a hand job. Would love to see more boner in school or public places, morning woods, and tf around them in nasty ways. The idea of the straight Coach being humiliated like his, of inches away of the wet humid boner of Sammy, and inches away from his ass, sitting in classes, was so good. This story is just hot stuff. Can't wait for the next part. Please more gross parts!! Would welcome an arse gross tf chapter again, the party one was just too good.

Reviewer: camehere2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

not as unf as the last chapter with the party and bathroom ending, but still i came. but it will be hard to top the party chapter that one was just unf big time

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

The chapter was really good and all and had some really good parts, for example the boner part, but I found the teacher giving Sammy head just off. I can't imagine something like this happening on a normal school or teacher/student realitionship, just didn't fit. Would had been way better if she just told him its normal and all and than thats it. And Sammy jerking off later at school having blue balls. I think the Coach ending as a cum stain on Sammys bed cover would had been great, or Sammy wiping away the "cum" with one of his worn dirty underpants, letting them drop on the flor next to his bed, that would had been a more fitting end for the Coach.

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

Don't make Sammy aware of the things he did, that would ruin his 'good heart'. It is so much better to hink of those bad guys turned into nightmarish body parts and Sammy goes through his day withouth any thought of them. Speaking of heart... how ironic his name is Heart! That was such a cool idea, so fitting. I liked how you make Sammy sorrow and feel worried all the time, even he didnt do anything bad, and how he was all hope he is fine, and I am sure he is fine and all. The last part: it would kill Sammy if it turned out something bad happened to the Coach. I had such a good laugh. Also glad Lucas didnt find out, I dont want the friendship be ruined or break between them. As a ittle wish, dont let Lucas die. Also dont make Lucas become gay, that wouldnt fit in the plot. It is such a thrilling little teas Sammy has these feelings for him, maybe a part of Lucas starts to talk with Sammy about chicks and Lucas actually has no idea about Sammy being gay or bi. I also thought after this chapter, Sammy could be straight too but just a heartly character. Hope the police will move away from the school and wont play any role anymore, I would like the plot continue without this, having them go into other directions. I just loved about this story the most this school atmosphere and everything, let it continue like that. Maybe make a few tf more suffering with them still be aware of whats happening especially in cruel parts they became, that would be cool. Thanks for writing,

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

I forgot I found another picture how I imagined Sammy look like in that bunny costume: 

http://i.imgur.com/CCVmpPz.png

 Especially with those tight strech jeans, and it's just so cute, maybe though with a bit of a more twink looking facial expression like Nai from Karneval:

http://i.imgur.com/3CNVTSf.png
http://i.imgur.com/QzDa0CV.png

I also like the skinny bone structure of the neck and throat muscles and adam apple, that would be awesome if you could describe Sammy more like that.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

idea with the testicel and the coach into cum, really enjoyed it, especially of the in class part. sammy turning red was the best part; i saw it totally in my mind of him standing in his skiny clothes and the boner down visible so "hard" and him turning in total shame, please more like this. let him say unwittingly if possible, i like these kind of stories the most. i never really read any no unaware taged stories. keep it up. hope to see more scat and watersport parts again.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2017 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 5

!!!! :] You made my day, so happy I just read a new chapter of this epic story.

I am not bothering you too much with ass long messages like my previous, I truly hope you liked all the ideas in those and will use them eventually though, that would be AWESOME.

This chapter of course had epic length again, everything written in the same awesome style of yours. So of course I will vote it 5 stars, how could I not!? The chapter though was a bit of a downer for me, I think it had a few logic flaws, which in the past chapters, never happened. Actually the insane flaw of logic in this story is what drives me loving it so much, in combination also with, and which is very important I want to say this: Please... please please my god I am begging you, let Sammy stay unaware!! It's what making this story a jewel out of a sand of ordinary stories. Please dont change it. I saw the first line of you thought of changing it, and my heart dropped. It would totally destroy this story. Please dont change it.

Here are the logic flaws though which were a bit of a downer for my taste:

"Price laughed, "Did you see the kid? I bet he can't even lift 10 pounds. How's he suppose to take down a 200 pound kid and get him out of the school or a party full of kids? No, the kid didn't do it, but he's involved in it. Who ever is behind this has to be close to the kid.""

I think it would had made way more sense, if the police guy said something along after seeing how weak and what a wimp this kid was, like, did you see him, of course he has nothing to do with any of this, and they would totally cut him of the list. Saying he was maybe still connected to it was a bit unrealistic in my oppinion.

The second, and totally unlogic part was with the teacher. This was totally a downer for me, of her suddenly giving Sammy a play and then even a blowjob, as a teacher? It was so... meh. I loved the idea of someone giving Sammy a blowjob though, but a teacher of his class, just doesnt seem right to me. I hope she will disappear too, which maykes sense of Sammy thinking she got worried maybe getting in trouble, fired, or even in jail of what she did to Sammy.

Then I also found the testicle idea a bit of a flaw, it would had made sense maybe if the couch became a spermia, but then he couldnt "ticke the prickle" hahaha.

These parts were like feeling of me giving a bit of a 8 out of 10, but then..., the other parts totally made good for it again, for example the "boner in class" idea, was SOO DAMN GOOD!!

"Sammy felt his penis starting to grow as he did his best to not think about anything sexual."

All these lines around that part, and how it were going soft again, then grow, and everything was so damn written epic. And it fit perfectly into this high school plot. I actually remembered I once got a boner too, or maybe twice, in school class and it was horrible, I felt so embarrsed and tried everything to hide it, LOL!

You could had made it even better of writing out how it would totally form and expose through Sammys skinny streached skater jeans.

I loved the wet spot down there part too.

Then of course everything of the itro, I btw LOVE this soo much. You do it in every chapter, writing out these parts of Sammy going home, making homework, eating, going on the bus, changing clothes, classes, and everything, is SOO interesting to read, seriously, I love it. It fits so perfectly in the high school style, and just makes this story amazing.

Then also how you made Sammy feeling cocnerned and everything, totally having no idea he was "behing" those missings and how he even came up with dont worry, I am sure he just broke his phone, and all this, fantastic. I love how you make Sammy caring so much and literally make him a person who "coudlnt harm a fly" (which actually would be so ironic of those two fly tf ideas I spoke about lol!", maybe thw two cops turn into flys visiting him again). I could also see, maybe one of the flys ends as a smear (still lviing after smashed) on a rolled up comic magazines of Sammys, and the other, half smashed, Sammy feeds to a pet of his, maybe a frog in an aquarium, or a gold fish. Then the first one could maybe be detached, his head falling of, and like in insects, those body parts still live a few moments along, landing on Sammys soft pc chair (maybe he has these really girly ones, with a Mikey Mouse styles Disney child chairs lol), and Sammy plops his moistured boxer ass on it, doing homework, maybe even jerking off. I could see this scenary totally be awesome of Sammy looking through the aquarium in his boxers and tshirt, smiling, and go along pal, I have a snack for you. Maybe even more ironic of them had before in biology class about how digestion works in fish or frogs.

Then of course I would sitll love more than anything the anus tf plot idea. And also maybe not loosing conciousness of this tf, which would literally mean ... hell, for the person, forever.

Please dont change the style from unaware to aware, it would literally kill the plot. I am still giving 10 stars for this because of the great parts in it, and like I said, I loved the blow job idea lol, not that much of it giving by a teacher though. Also the boner in class was epic. And just tha carying nature of Sammy, so sweat and just amazing.


I could also see the police now suspecting the couach and blame him, that he has to behind it, now after his vanishing!! And it would fit so well of Lucas may say like what an asshole, that prick was some kind of perverted freak or something, he must be behind all of their missings.


Go on, this story is my favorite, and I hope to say way more chapters, please dont end it too soon <3 Thanks for this awesome chapter again!!! 

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