Reviewer: ILike Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2018 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

YOU BACK!! enjoyed the two chapters more than any else so far, so happy your back and how you are. the last one was the best, the popcorn kernel idea, the best so far. would enjoy another vore and or scat tf, totally the best becazse the most cruel. the party one was also good.

Reviewer: adamnight Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2018 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

Another chapter totally to my taste. I like vore the most but also ass stuff. I cant imagine a more cruel ending for the two teens who acted so immature and mean. And it's so enjoable how Sammy took a morning dump and didnt give a shit quite literally about them. Him being unaware is so much better than aware. That line at the end totally said it right, not even thinking twice about his morning waste. Would enjoy another chapter like this. He does dumps every morning so its totally in the clear for it.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2018 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

Are you kidding me!?? !!! AMAZING new chapter, and another so fast, this was so worth waiting, I am so happy you write more often now. No Truly the best chapter so far. And to make it fast, this is totally my favorite chapter now of the entire story.

And there was soo MUCH irony in here, I love irony more than anything. I will come back to what I mean with this in a bit.

How you write this story is just intense, and seriously, it is by far now one of the best stories ever written, period. On all platforms. I never read such a high quality story before, over time. And the last two chapters?? I loved so much how you put so much love and time in it. The lenght is incredible.

Can I please talk a little bit how a cute and fantastic character Sammy is? You created such a nice cute boy, and he has the most sweet character. I totally can put myself into him as a reader, how you make him have a heart brake over Lucas and how he struggles through his teenage time is fantastic. All the plots you included, the school hours, the afternoons, the free time, the at home time, the cnversations... with his mom, the parties, the bec over his head things, cinema... ALL is sooo fantastic. I would also love to see him maybe have morning woods, jerk off in his room sitting on his PC maybe just in tight boxers. I even could see him wear pink tight boxers, in skinny gray faded jeans like this: https://i.imgur.com/kV2ebv8.png

I also saw this pictured and it reminded me of Sammy of the bunny and colors: https://i.imgur.com/O4s7ulH.jpg

Jumping straight to the end of course I noticed this: Just as Sammy was about to go fall asleep he felt a weird tingling sensation run through his body. "I wish Lucas loved me," Sammy prayed drifting off to sleep.

I hope more than anything, that the next chapter isn't the end. Please don't end this story!! I would wish to read on "forever" honestly. There could still soo much happen and Sammy turn rude random people into goo... or in here, his waste.

Taking up the word, of course I noticed the incredible ironic word play you did here... first Sammy said this:

Sammy eyed him like he knew that it was him, "I don't want any of it to go to waste..."

And then in the stomach the two bullies were like: "Hang on Brandon, there's got to be a way out," Mike said HAA!! A way out of here... get it!? LOL!

And then... the ending, of them become Sammys WASTE! IS soo ironic and awesome, especially because Sammy said it before, he doesn't want his popcorn to "go to waste"... FANTASTIC!!

And now a few words about the best tf you did so far: How Mike was accidentally swallowed whole, and this leads to his outer shell just to melt away, and his inner self... the kernel... books a one way trip through Sammys digestive tract... with a very unfortunate ending, and HIM survive it, and mostly will even survive a horrible future ahead. This is the best thing ever! Please do it again. I would love to see some shitty person become Sammys or maybe Lukes anus, and stay alive, forever, and the cruel moments of him burping, vomitting up turds, and him scream in his mind, and is like please oh gooODD NO NONO -- GA- VOMI---

I loved this sentence so much: He would have vomited if he could, but as a popcorn kernel, one couldn't really throw up. 

But also the best part?? This one:

Mike saw through the water above and saw where he just came out of, and things became clear where he was. He was in the bottom of a toilet, stuck in someone's waste. This couldn't possibly be happening, Mike thought to himself as he tried to move or dislodge himself form the heavy mass he was attached to but found he was just as stuck as he always had been. Before he knew it, another object came crashing down from the sky darkening his vision from the outside world. It was another mass of leftovers that the giant above him didn't need, as it collided with the water. Mike cried out as he watched the mass drop down near him. 

You shuld have him literally scream at this part NO NONO ONNO GT MEET ME OOUT OFF HEEEERE... and him freak out... where Sammy, above, just casually sits, maybe txt on his phone, and then wipes.
The moment he realized he was just stuck in waste... and another creamy solid ploped near him down sinking into the water, was the best moment of horror ever in this story. Fantastic.... AWESOME!! My favorite part in this story to this point.

And then!? YOU even did it better! Of sammy standing up after wiping to piss. LOOOL!! You rock man!! This is totally plots I have waited for. And This is now my total favorite so far!!

I also loved so much how these rude teens spoke about chicks laughing and making rude jokes, and then also throwing popcorn at Sammy.... fantastic idea!!

I hope so much you wont end this story in the next.... please!! I would still love to see lots of unfortunate dark tf, anus, flies maybe and another like ant or bug, maybe another vore in the future, maybe someine turns into a peanute which also doesnt digest. A cum stain ending, a fleshlight would be amazing, and Sammy never cleans it. Or maybe it was Lukas because of him being straight.

But also... how you build up the chapters and how it suddenly turns into a nightmare is just YOUR own style like no one does on here, and you ROCK at it!!!

Can't wait for the next to come. Thank you so much for writing again. THANK YOU!

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 8

Another gorgeous chapter. So good outplayed and well thought. I always liked the love struggles Sammy goes though, it is like a true story. And the cinema idea was a good one especially with the popcorn eating, and I even remember some teens did this to me too. Rude!!! And I can't get enough of bullies get what they deserve, this one literally had a shitty end in sight, eehh. I have to say i enjoy your chapters the most, where the transformed bad guys stay living, like in some eternal hell, that is soo much better. I also thought of for a second one ending as Lucas poo the other as Sammys ehh.