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Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2017 6:24 AM Title: Preparing to Revisit

Great! don't drop this one!

how small are you shooting for?



Author's Response:

In this story he remains baby sized.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2016 7:50 AM Title: Preparing to Revisit

Great intro! :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  I was thinking really hard on how I could set it up like that was the start of the story and then cross the reader when it wasn't really.

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