[Report This]Date: August 18 2017 4:03 AM Title: Acerola
Hi hi.
A great chapter, the building up was enough to give the mc's friends reason to los his patience as well as have the mc get a contrast with Acerola before and after shrinking.
The girl's playfulness was really enjoyable to read through the whole chapter and added a good pack of humilliation to each interaction with the shrunken dude. I love how you could fit in so many different kind of not so usual interaction, as well as the description on each of Acerola's odorous games. Also, it fits a lot with my tastes, and made me enjoy some other stuff that I'm usually indifferent to, like the golden shower part.
The last part was also really good, having the mc feeling powerless without even touching him and punishing the other guy at the same time. About the not-so-mean guy, I wonder if he got to the "best outcome" one could get with Acelora, or if he's even alive...
So yeah, excellent chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you KentaRyu, I'm glad you liked it as well. You know I had some trepidation when attempting certain interactions but with what I added in and cut out, I figured the most I could add would be enough to give the readers a general idea of what to expect while letting them know the fear of being powerless. There's no greater fear than that one oneself unable to act, IMO that is.
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[Report This]Date: August 17 2017 11:34 PM Title: Acerola
It was great to see this story continued, sorry to hear you're bogged down by life stuff. I start college this week so I might be going through that soon too.
I loved how you delved into some really neglected giantess interactions this chapter. Although some were kind of brief, like wirh the photographs, 99% of other stories don't even seem to consider armpits spit etc. so ot was really riveting to get that here.
I loved this chapters theme so much because I'm a degenerate, probably one of my all time favorite chapters from you.
Author's Response:
Let's be degenerate's together then my friend. ^,^
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, It really makes me happy to know I took the right approach with a girl like Acerola. Was worried for awhile but I've only gotten positive feedback so far so I hope the next one will have just as much love as this one got.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2017 4:49 PM Title: Acerola
Man, this was a roller coaster of a chapter! Really enjoy your stuff and as a fan of the series myself I've been following this with curiosity since the first instalment. This is certainly my favourite chapter of the three! You used the odour tag masterfully, though I do wish she had eaten him. Would have loved to see how awful her mouth actually was. Perhaps it could be explored with another S/M girl? Much as I'd love to see Mallow return, or an alternate ending to the Acerola chapter, I understand the want to cover new characters each time. Plumeria comes to mind; she hasn't been mentioned yet to my knowledge, and as a Poison-type enthusiast her own hygiene may be fairly poisonous itself, if you catch my drift.
Still, that's just my two pence; your story at the end of the day, and I'm sure whatever you do with it will be just as excellent.
Keep up the amazing work, my good man!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your thoughts Lord AJ, I will take them into account. I do have plans for all the girls. Some more thought out than others, but Plumeria has come to mind, along with some other grunts as well, don't you worry. What was seen here today will be repeated, but don't expect it to be as cheerful as it was for Acerola if you catch my drift.
I hope to please with the new chapters I install in the future, and I hope to be writing them sooner than later.