[Report This]Date: June 19 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 13 & Epilogue
Gotta say, aside from a fantastic and compelling story, that vore/torture scene with Diamonda was one of the best and detailed I've ever seen. It wasn't too long, it wasn't to short, and it was perfectly imaged. Great story, and it ended right about where it should have. Look forward to future stories you may write.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 13 & Epilogue
What a great wrap-up to the story! I had a lot of fun reading it, the characters were lovable (well, the ones that were intended to be anyway!) and the plot played out nicely. I'm especially happy with how you managed to fit in all of these little kink scenes, but without the story being derailed or the characters' personalities having to take a back seat; if anything, it only added to their stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks! That's usually my goal with these stories -- indulge my kinks and fantasies but make sure it all still works as a story.
Date: June 11 2017 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 13 & Epilogue
Excellent job wrapping things up! Always nice when characters like Diamonda get their comeupp--er, down-ance.
In my headcanon, Mina & Sapph meet a gentle cowboy who's willing to take Mina for her first rodeo.
Author's Response:
Her first rodeo? Is that a euphemism for something? Because, er, Mina likes the ladies.
Seriously though, thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.