Date: February 13 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't tend to write reviews unless they pretain to something first such as other series or shows i might like but this story surprised me. The interactions are a little rugged but i like how the story is progressing with Tor as she see's Eric differently with each chapter. How it ends is still up in the air but i think i'll be back to continue reading this. It's sure to be an entertaining story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I appreciate each and every one.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2017 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to reveal that the greatest possible threat to a couple of humans is not starvation, plague, or bandits, but instead Elders, who are "used" to eating humans, and refuses the prospect of defending them. Not only are Elders not peaceful, they are active, willing threats to human life.
I like how Eric's only issue with the arranged marriage is that he'd have no choice in the matter, but he himself is only concerned with the physical appearance of women, as well as is host to a personality so vile, a peasant whom he has helped rejects him.
Eric confuses me. He seems to help people or demand Tor help people but seems indifferent to their plight whilst he does so. He didn't do much for the Doctor or assistant she literally tortured to death for verbally offending her, he didn't do much beyond suggest Tor do something once when the prospect of the family dying is very real... i feel like thats intentional. It illustrates how Eric as a prince is blind to the importance of people's lives.
Author's Response: In Eric's defense, he was very "sheltered" and influenced by his father. That will come up in the next chapter or two. He tries, but just can't quite connect with problems that are not his own. Thank you so much for your review and continued support! It means a lot. :)
[Report This]Date: February 10 2017 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hello! I love your story thus far! Keep it up, I'm eager for every update you make; just don't push yourself too hard.
The following are my own opinions about the setting, and that's all they are. Opinions. :)
I love it when the giantess is gentle towards a select chosen one, and indifferent to other humans. It's like gentle and cruel in one. Not a huge fan of giantesses who wouldn't harm a fly. Even though I'm primarily a gentle-gts lover. So the tsundere attitude rocks my socks.
I feel like Eric gets away with talking back to her too easily sometimes. It makes me wonder why she's so soft on him. I dunno. But I like it.
I'm a little sad that she ate the doctor and the other dude, but my other head wasn't. Oh well. Keep it up and have a good one!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review my story! I appreciate it. I plan to have an update this weekend sometime so keep an eye out. ;)
Date: February 08 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
good going...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: February 05 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
That's supposed to be "do you hate", sorry.
[Report This]Date: February 05 2017 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
"My people are peaceful." An Elder attempts to devour an entire camp of humans, tries to run, and fails miserably. And despite what would have been mass murder, aforementioned Elder is allowed to go loose.
Well this time is wasn't Tor. But I am hoping that every single one of my reviews begins the same way.
Eric: "My dad only cares about himself! He wanted to arrange a marriage for me!"
Doctor: "I wanna arrange a marriage between you and this girl."
Eric: "I don't care about her personality, I'll IMMEDIATELY state how hot she is like a lecher!"
Doctor: "So why do you like arranged marriages?"
Eric: "Because I'd have no independence!"
Doctor: "... Arent you a slave?"
Eric: "I'm a pet! I have no independence, rights, or ability to stop my master from wanton acts of murder and violence."
Doctor: "..."
Author's Response: I always look forward to your reviews, just because they crack me up and summarize character thoughts/actions in a way that I may not see when looking at the story. Thanks for your thoughts!
Date: January 31 2017 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey Coal, Do you have a personal website where you upload your stories too? There's rumors giantessworld isn't going to have it's domain renewed. Just curious and i'd love to see how your story ends.
Author's Response: I publish on deviant art under the same username as well as aryion.com under the name JinxedMyself. Glad you like my stories!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to kidnap a doctor from his family and belligerently demand his service... presumably with out the monetary compensation required to not only pay for the business he is losing by not being where he is supposed to be, the cost of repairing two crippled legs, and the trauma his children most likely will never recover from.
Loved the chapter.
How tall is Idiot? Is he a huge draft horse that even Tor finds large? Or a pony since giant horses are already giant enough?
Oh! And I forgot.
"My people are peaceful." Proceeds to desire to murder her own kin, even the one who clearly isn't at fault. I love this trend...
Author's Response:
She seems like such a contradiction, doesn't she? Just remember the other half of that statement. "but our anger is fierce when roused." Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! It means quite a lot to me. <3
Date: January 17 2017 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I am sorry I love Tor. I think she has a tsundere charm about her that I love. I kinda hopes she keeps eating people that angry her for two reasons. One, I hope it becomes something of a gage where Tor will have to hide her people diet from Eric, which I hope she fails at. Two, I hope as her feeling Eric grows she just starts eating women she thinks are trying to steal Eric away from her. I hope to read more and I hope to see more of this unlikely romance. Also, like pixis I to love the mythology debate and hatred two races have for each other. Great story.
Author's Response: Don't be sorry, I love Tor, too! She's so cagey with her emotions it makes it fun to write. There's more mythology to debate and more hatred between the two races to be seen. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: January 17 2017 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I actually love Tor, am I her only fan out here?lol and I really want to know her brothers and see how are they going to be with the little princeling. How are they anyway?cant imagine if they are more tough and ruthless than Tor. Im so excited to see how this is going to go.
Author's Response: Her brothers will actually be coming into the story fairly soon! I look forward to your reviews when they do! Thanks for taking the time to let me know your thoughts.
[Report This]Date: January 16 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Considering the leader of the guys sent to apprehend Eric had a brand on his face, but was still scared to the point he'd face an Elder, he must be Satan incarnate for Eric to become a pet rather than risk his father's wrath. That or the girl he was supposed to marry preferred to keep the toilet seat down or something unspeakably horrible like that.