Reviewer: SilverFlame Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2007 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 14

Well, I'm not exactly far into this, er, epic, but I already love it. It has that lovely style of humor that's just so appealing to us nerds. I really enjoy all the various jokes about MMORPGs and breaking the fourth wall. You really do have quite the gift for humor.

The story itself is also very well-written. I don't find myself halted by grammar errors or lost in a single massive paragraph (although if this entire story were a single paragraph, I would have given up a loooong time ago). I've always loved stories that you can just lose yourself in and be content with reading them, and it's great that I've found yet another story to do that in with yours. I look forward to reading the next, oh...*counts*...69 chapters.

Whew.