Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2008 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 111

Read all the way to chapter 111. This story was good at times, but once the game shifted to be truly lethal I felt it lost a lot of its charm. It became more of a slaughterfest than the fun charming story it started out as.

Author's Response:

Sorry you didn't like it. I don't feel there were very many deaths in the story, but I've tried to maintain an equal amount of charm and suspense.