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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2018 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 23

Now thats what Im talking about! Thats what I was expecting Haley to do when she had them wash up, although I did enjoy that scene too.

 

Hope Sydney plans on using him this way a lot. She seemed to take on a more dominant personality now that she knows he's broken. Love it. 

 

Love this universe! 

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

Well maybe Haley didn't use him as a toy but Sydney did so can't say this guy has the best luck. I mean most people here would LOVE to be in his position but it's obvious that Dave the character doesn't like what's happening to him. And in real life would this be pleasurable for the tiny man?

I think it would be mostly pain and struggling for breath, I don't think in real life this would be sexy. Anyway, is there ever gonna be a nice person that is immune? I notice that not only are the immune people terrible to tiny people they are just douches in general. Is this inhenrent to the gene that makes them immune?

I'm interested in this universe itself but I recognize that WE the readers are basically limited to whatever bubble Dave finds himself in. So the chances of getting any kind of backstory or world building are slim.

Anyway I do REALLY like this story. Even tho the big people are terrible I haven't yet seen someone I consider EVIL. In other words someone who kills tinies for no reason. So far it's just a bunch of pricks that see tinies as commodities and treat them worse than hamsters.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 23

Dave fianally broke, good for him.

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