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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2017 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 2:Word Choice

Wow, a sequal to this awesome tale! Glad to see you keeping this going. Off to an excellent start!

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 2:Word Choice

Damn, Dick really had it rough there. Very nice chapter. You really captured the difference between how Dick felt about his situation, and how Alexis felt about it. Also, nice touch with the unintended torture by Julia.

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