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Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2017 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 4: Jasper

Awesome chapters, and it was great to see 2 in one day. I actually just recently reread the first story, so it was cool to see Jasper back and looking for revenge. I hope you're not gone as long between chapters this time, but I know life can get hectic, so I understand.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 4: Jasper

Great stuff! Little confused though. I thought I remembered during Keylas test with Steph that she could do what she wanted, even kill her? And that she most likely wouldnt survive? Which of course, she didn't. I may need to go reread that anyway, the flash back scene reminded me how great that chapter was *weg*

Looking forward to more of this!

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