Reviews For Becoming A Family
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Date: September 16 2017 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: Funeral Drab

pls write more



Author's Response: I will try.

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Date: June 01 2017 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Funeral Drab

well tha fact about a nun being tall being your big sis and her having an odor problem its rlly original, i luv this.

though i hope to see more from margaret and her stewing hot black pumps



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Darrennick Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2017 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Funeral Drab

Well This is my first review,sorry if it sucks >.<

I feel that the relationship between Alex,his sister grew too fast?Other then that I really enjoyed the story especially the parts where his sister teases him.

I hope the story will be continued soon :)



Author's Response:

In no way your review sucked by the way. 

Yes, the relationship beteen Alex and his sister did grow pretty fast. I tried to make the reason for that due to his gullible personality, which due to his personality, alot of ill-minded things will happen to him later in the story. Thanks for the review. 

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